I think I liked this song more than a lot of your others, the game's inspired intro and then a move to the old fantasy metal (or whatever the genre may be), but not that "rough" (unlike most of your stuff which is very close to speed metal etc. which I don't normally listen to).
The lyrics were not bad either, I see you really got into it, not only by lyrics but also by your comments on the forums.
This is all looked as an individual song, but on the other hand, 90% of the time you basically make the same metal song, wrapped in a game apropriate different genre. The multiplied voice recordings, the rythm changes, the rhyme is basically always present and always a-b-a-b, so is the song structure...and how freaking often do you make a chorus out of one line that repeats twice?
Basically I think I only like this song over other you've made because the style suits me and I've played the game and loving it.
And in some articles, you mentioned some of those points really don't concern you and you like it that way...which is fine I guess, to each their own, I just think progress and experimenting improves a musician.