144 said:
I'm not saying I don't think the kid wouldn't have written it, or even that the kid may have felt this way. Read the post again. I am saying that there are specific passages in the body of the text that seem suspicious to me, based on my own experiences. Red flags, I said. The guy I quoted claimed it was blatantly obvious, and I said not necessarily. Perhaps you didn't see those flags as a result of bilingual hampering, or maybe we don't pay attention to the same kinds and quantities of politics.
I'm also impressed at your comparable examples. I wonder if you mailed your letter by yourself? If not, I don't know if your mother looked at your letters before helping you send them. But Charlotte's mother did. And I think she "helped" her daughter "make them a bit better."
You think a 7-year-old can't figure out how to mail a letter? I think a lot of people are underestimating kids these days.
Well, maybe that's true now that all kids just hang out in the net and email each other and whatnot?
And I don't agree that those 'flags' you mentioned are any proof of anything.
144 said:
"I want you to make more Lego girl people and let them go on adventures and have fun." It feels like someone attempting to use a child's voice to voice her opinion, which is exactly what's happening. But it needs to keep a balance between getting the message through and still sounding like a kid actually wrote it, so "OK!???" is as the end, just in case. And honey, I think when you write pink and blue, you should put girls and boys in little letters above that. It will help enforce the point that Lego is playing to gender stereotypes, sweetie.
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It's very possible the kid was influenced by stuff she hears at home, maybe her parents or siblings talk about that stuff, maybe they even told her what to write.
But I think a lot of people are underestimating children here...
I learned to write when I was 4, and have kept stuff I wrote, so I have pretty good idea what my level of prose was at what age.