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Nukey

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Xero Scythe said:
also, by any chance is the person you are referring to as refusing to edit me? I already edited my sheet.
No it's not you, it's someone on the first page.

TheGreatCoolEnergy said:
Ah a Pilot. Good idea. Do we have a pilot? I know we have like 3 engineers
Actually only two now considering that Sentinel10 changed his sheet to a heavy weapons, and I'm narrowing down to just one. You can probably guess which one of those is going to make it.
 

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I really want to come into this one:D sheet will be up very soon!

NVM THIS...........................

I want to make a new one, but I'm like REALLY tired, seeing as there's no female character in here (none that I noticed, if there is one, let me know) I'm going to make one! :D its going to be quite similar to my already character here, but I want to make a little different sheet, a girl with a goatee isn't going to impress anyone is it? :p

So I'm making a new one tomorrow, around 9-11, depends on time-zones, hope you reserved a spot for me :) See ya'll in the morning
 

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iceland said:
I really want to come into this one:D sheet will be up very soon!
Holy crap! You're back! =D

I thought you went MIA in October where the hell did you go?!

*Regains composure*

Well, it's great to see you back on the forum buddy. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
 

Jav3lin

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Exictednuke said:
iceland said:
I really want to come into this one:D sheet will be up very soon!
Holy crap! You're back! =D

I thought you went MIA in October where the hell did you go?!

*Regains composure*

Well, it's great to see you back on the forum buddy. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
Heh, yeah i took a little R&R, good to see my reputation still proceeds though ^^ Good to know my memory wasn't lost in the void ;>. Cant wait to begin, get ready for my big and fancy words!
 

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I'm writing up mine, please wait! I'm actually pretty excited
 

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Okay here goes my try.

Name: Nouw Corien
Race: Human , Half-European and Half-New Zealand

Age: 32

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Only his hair and face looks like that. He is fit and stands out in the crowd for he is 2 metres tall. He usually never shows his face and when he does, it is emotionless. He always wears his armour

Role: Stealth Sniper.

Armor:A custom made suit of titanium and adamantium ( couldn't resist sorry )It is a light suit that offers stealth, speed and agility. The chest-plates are adamantium and the rest is titanium. But only a thin-layer. Over the adaman. and titan. are invisibility fibers that change to the environment he or she is in. The suit is hydrothermally charged and has enough power to run it for 24 hours including reserve power. Without the stealth, the armor is red on the chest-plates, red lines on the legs and arms and the rest is grey. The custom-made helmet is like the one from Starship Troopers except that it has alien material covering over his face. It also can change color. The HUD shows ammo, power remaining, his/her surroundings ( m2 100) temperature, brain-waves and emotions.

Cybernetics/Biotics: Nouw has a rather basic biotic. When he was on his way to a mission, a window shattered from a asteroid and he half flew out. The Automatic Door shut and ripped his upper-half of his body. He had special surgery to reduce?extract?destroy? his waste. Every 5 hours, a tank on his back 1/4 fills. He can simply pull it out and pour it onto the ground. It mixes with special chemicals in his body that evaporates quickly. 1 litre in 1 minute. The smell is a minty one. During the surgery, they helped his asthma and digestion problems. Even though the asthma still stands, he can temporarily destroy it. 3 days and then he'll have to puff the gas again. He has enhanced sight and speed.

Weaponry/Equipment: Nouw has a modified Sniper Rifle called the SKHTY 3417 MOD a.k.a Chrys. It is a laser weapon. It has a melting system in it that melts crystals and fires them. It implodes in the body. In this mod you can fire the crytals without melting them which comes in handy and you can charge it and! you can manually implode the crystal. It has a hand gripping stick thingy that has the trigger on it and a long board thingy that you can rest on your arm and a long front with a tri-pod. It has an enhanced scope that has an auto-target system. He also wields a lazer dagger that penetrates most alloy. It is like a laser chainsaw

Personality: He is a quiet man that dislikes talk. He usually never talks unless he must. Even though he never talks he knows what to do and does it well. He isn't aggressive and can control his anger quite easily. When in fights he ends it quickly, trying not to make a scene. Ignoring this he is very nice and polite. But he in the field he's never nice. Quite harsh actually.

Bio: Nouw grew up in New Korea, Seoul. Both of his parents were Bankers that even though worked a Night-Shift, manged to spend time with Nouw. He is gifted with intelligence and quick-thinking. He spent most of his time at school, studying and reading. On his 11th birthday; while coming back from work; A suicide bomber destroyed the Vehicle his parents were in. A report was made into this and their bodies were never found. From then, he moved into America to start working as a Student Teacher and was a success. He turned into a lecturer for English Literature but was forced into the army. He found a talent in sniping and slowly gained rank. The great act that turned him into a Sentinel is that he took down a whole town of Drug Traffickers from a great distance of 500 yards with an old sniper rifle. Now he is waiting excitedly for his opportunity at the ...

Notes: Suffers from mild asthma but it is under control ( read bio ). He loves spicy food for it "ups his game" but no one see's him eat.


P.S. If you find a problem, quote me or PM me. And sorry for double post
 

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Name: Rezzea

Race: Nazar

Age: 48

Gender: Female

Appearance: Rezzea stands at 4'6 weighs 87kg's (somewhat of a couch weigh) her skin is ebony brown/black with a hint of Scarlet red paved mostly on her face and upper body torso, leading into her shoulders and upper arms. The skin is less slimy than she ever remembered from her homeplanet due to all the showering she does on base, along with all the heavy clothing. Her hands she likes to keep clean so not to disturb others. Her face is kind and friendly, but only if you don't notice the fake eye on her right side, and the distinct scar all along her face and up to her skull, leading less than an inch from the nose bone.

Role: Scout / Infiltrator.

Armor: Wears a combination of Platinum alloy and a smelting compound used by the Grel, to make it lighter and much more flexible. She wears this armor on the feet, along with a brown turtleneck and a light brown heavy jacket. She wears burgundy brown pants and her helmet is Ebony colored, with green Grel Markings almost covering its surface. The helmet and the right side of her face and part of her skull is also made of this blend of Platinum alloy and the smelting compound known as Grout. She wears no gloves, and armor is nearly nowhere to be found except for a double layered Grel skin covering most of her armor from the inside, making her clothes and armor twice as strong as a Grel's skin but not a weird skin color.

Cybernetics/Biotics: Her right side face has been replaced along with a lot of skull bone. She looks nothing different except for a distinct scar, where the platinum plates were inserted. She also has no right eye, she tends to use a fake eyeball instead. But while using her helmet, she takes it out. Her helmet connects to the eye's sockets letting her get partly bionic vision, being able to set out a scanner, scanning for heatsignatures, distinct sounds, all types of gasses and where oxygen is low or high.

Weaponry/Equipment: She carries an armored crossbow, the bands are made from Titanium and the base of the weapon is made from Platinum, Titanium and Grout. The Grout decreases it's weight by the Titanium, so it's like it's simply made from Platinum. On her back she carries two Grel skin sheathes including two identical one-handed swords. Each has a marking on the the blade, carved into it. Larceny & Fraud are their names.

Personality: Incredibly unstable, Rezzea may look friendly, but mood-swings happen weekly, often even daily, going from Friendly to Angry, to even Sadness within minutes with no apparent reason. While not suffering from mood-swings, she's mostly cheerful, but she has a humor for anything and everything. Even her own death.

Bio: Rezzea grew up on one of the smallest home planets known to Razar, called Drayz. Her family was wealthy and she grew up having no worries of war and conflict. But at the age of 26 she found out that her parent's business and living hadn't been truly without cost. They had been smuggling slaves, hostages, illegal substances such as drugs and illegal alcohol. Their business had been made 9 years before she was born, and she was devastated when the local police came and took them off to jail. They faced the life sentence, because in their yard they wont traces of bodies, slaves or hostages that hadn't made the trip alive. They couldn't find any hard evidence of them killing them, but 7 bodies in their yard was enough to give them half their life in prison. Except, the smuggling would hold up the other half, along with the cargo that was found on the loading dock. By the time she was 28, she decided to step into the military, and joined up. Their parents were excellent con-artists and she fancied the skill. After years and years of hard work and devotion to the Federation, she is now asked to join in on a special task force. She awaits eagerly inside a transport ship on its way to meet the commander.

Notes: Many are to come :)
 

Nukey

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Sci-Fi luver437 said:
Very nice, I like the fact you were specific about ethnicity as well. Very clever.

The only problem I can think of it that we already have two snipers, if you just edit that I think you're good.


iceland said:
Name: Rezzea

Race: Nazar

Age: 48

Gender: Female

Appearance: Rezzea stands at 4'6 weighs 87kg's (somewhat of a couch weigh) her skin is ebony brown/black with a hint of Scarlet red paved mostly on her face and upper body torso, leading into her shoulders and upper arms. The skin is less slimy than she ever remembered from her homeplanet due to all the showering she does on base, along with all the heavy clothing. Her hands she likes to keep clean so not to disturb others. Her face is kind and friendly, but only if you don't notice the fake eye on her right side, and the distinct scar all along her face and up to her skull, leading less than an inch from the nose bone.

Role: Scout / Infiltrator.

Armor: Wears a combination of Platinum alloy and a smelting compound used by the Grel, to make it lighter and much more flexible. She wears this armor on the feet, along with a brown turtleneck and a light brown heavy jacket. She wears burgundy brown pants and her helmet is Ebony colored, with green Grel Markings almost covering its surface. The helmet and the right side of her face and part of her skull is also made of this blend of Platinum alloy and the smelting compound known as Grout. She wears no gloves, and armor is nearly nowhere to be found except for a double layered Grel skin covering most of her armor from the inside, making her clothes and armor twice as strong as a Grel's skin but not a weird skin color.

Cybernetics/Biotics: Her right side face has been replaced along with a lot of skull bone. She looks nothing different except for a distinct scar, where the platinum plates were inserted. She also has no right eye, she tends to use a fake eyeball instead. But while using her helmet, she takes it out. Her helmet connects to the eye's sockets letting her get partly bionic vision, being able to set out a scanner, scanning for heatsignatures, distinct sounds, all types of gasses and where oxygen is low or high.

Weaponry/Equipment: She carries an armored crossbow, the bands are made from Titanium and the base of the weapon is made from Platinum, Titanium and Grout. The Grout decreases it's weight by the Titanium, so it's like it's simply made from Platinum. On her back she carries two Grel skin sheathes including two identical one-handed swords. Each has a red marking on the base of the blade, carved into it. Larceny, her main-hand sword has 19 markings, but Fraud, her off-hand weapon has 11 markings.

Personality: Incredibly unstable, Rezzea may look friendly, but mood-swings happen weekly, often even daily, going from Friendly to Angry, to even Sadness within minutes with no apparent reason. While not suffering from mood-swings, she's mostly cheerful, but she has a humor for anything and everything. Even her own death.

Bio: Rezzea grew up on one of the smallest home planets known to Razar, called Drayz. Her family was wealthy and she grew up having no worries of war and conflict. But at the age of 26 she found out that her parent's business and living hadn't been truly without cost. They had been smuggling slaves, hostages, illegal substances such as drugs and illegal alcohol. Their business had been made 9 years before she was born, and she was devastated when the local police came and took them off to jail. They faced the life sentence, because in their yard they wont traces of bodies, slaves or hostages that hadn't made the trip alive. They couldn't find any hard evidence of them killing them, but 7 bodies in their yard was enough to give them half their life in prison. Except, the smuggling would hold up the other half, along with the cargo that was found on the loading dock. By the time she was 28, she decided to step into the military, and joined up. Their parents were excellent con-artists and she fancied the skill. After years and years of hard work and devotion to the Federation, she is now asked to join in on a special task force. She awaits eagerly inside a transport ship on its way to meet the commander.

Notes: Many are to come :)
Congratulations, you are the only person who will be playing as a female.

I actually can't think of anything wrong this sheet...Bravo!
 

Nukey

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TheGreatCoolEnergy said:
We have alot of people in this RP.
Yes, but I am narrowing it down using a selection. So not everyone will make it in.
 

SomeBritishDude

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Ok, character sheet below, with pictures and all.

[spoiler/] [b/]Name:[/b] Regrel (nick named "the Genii Pig")

[b/]Race:[/b] Grel

[b/]Age:[/b] 17

[b/]Gender:[/b] Male

[b/]Appearance:[/b] Regrel is tall for a Grel, standing at roughly 3'5. His hair is thick and coarse, a deep reddish brown. His snout is short with a large black leathy nose and wide horse like nostrils. On the end of this nose is a small Rhino like horn. Unusually for a Grel, Regrel has a white stripe of hair running from his eye line to the tip of his short tail. His ears are small with a stiff base and a floppy tip. His right eye is like that found on all Regrel; small, black and shiny. His other is a bright, electric blue.

[spoiler/][img/]http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/phishwithextracheese/Grel.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

[b/]Role:[/b] Demolitions Expert

[b/]Armour:[/b] Regrel wears state of the art, high endurance, rough terrain, heavy armour. The suit has a large metal collar where a bubble like visor pops up whenever in non breathable enviroments or combat. The suits also has the federation standard build in plasma resistant shield and such along with a few added editions made specifically for Demomen such as grenade storage and explosives scanner (allows for easy disarming of most standard explosive devices).

[spoiler/]Probably the closes thing I can find to it is this. [img/]http://blog.media-freaks.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/free-adventure-games.jpg[/img][/spoiler]



[b/]Cybernetics/Biotics:[/b] Regrel has been though several experimental Cybernetic enhancements, earning him in time the nickname of "the Genii Pig". His entire left arm and shoulder have been replaced with a fully robotic prosthetic limb, giving him enough strength in this arm to crush bones. His left eye has also been removed, replaced with one built for combat. With a built in scanner, optical zoom, night and heat vision in this one eye, Regrel is often able to access the battle field in mere seconds.

[b/]Weapons/Equipment:[/b] As part of his job Regrel often carries a large amount of explosive devices, be they motion sensitive/remote detonated mines or hand held/sticky/heat and motion seeking grenades.

These explosives can be divided into three main categories; EMP (which whips out all electric equipment within the blast radius), OD or Organic Disintegrators (which destroy all organic matter within the blast radius) and Plasma (which are basically everyday explosive devices).

Along with these explosives Regrel always carried his trusty X13 grenade launcher. This grenade launcher is able to fire up to 8 explosive devices in close succession. Due to the ingenious grenade adaptation kit which comes with it, he is able to adapt most grenades to fit the ammo cylinders in under a minute, allowing for an almost limitless supply of ammo. The launcher is supplied with a minimum of 8 plasma grenades and sticky bombs for most missions. The X13 is equipped with a lock on targeting system and scope.

Regrel also carries a light weight double barrelled plasma shotgun at his hip at all times for close encounters. If all else fails, he always has a cybernetic arm that can crush a human skull with one good punch.

[spoiler/][img/]http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/phishwithextracheese/Demoweapons.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

[b/]Personality:[/b] On the battle field Regrel prefers the direct approach. Though he knows better than to disregard a direct order, negotiation and reasoning are not his style when he knows he can often take out a whole group with a well placed mine or single X13 shot. Regrel will always scan any battle situation using his cybernetic eye. He nearly always has a few options of how to fight his and his teams' way out of any situation.

Off the battlefield Regrel is slightly unsure of himself. While he had a strong place within Grel society he finds himself out of place in an environment that is for the most part alien, even after his amount of time away from home. He is quiet and has very little understandings of the emotions of other humanoids. The harsh conditions of the asteroid he originated from means that he finds it difficult on long space journeys where there is very little to do but relax, which is something he just isn't accustomed to.

Much like any animal Regrel is very difficult to read. For the most part his face is blank; expressions that would be shown with facial movements such as a smile for happiness or tears for sadness are express with subtle body movements for him. His voice is gruff and deep; his English is slightly limited due to its vast difference to Grel (Grels speak much like animals with prehistoric roars, howls and body movements). He'll often speak with short, to the point sentences. When he does it's never about trivial things such as his own feels on a situation or others, its important sentences such as "there's a monster behind you".

[b/]Bio: [/b]Regrel grew up on the comet Geglon, named Delteron IV by the federation. The people of Geglon lived almost a tribal state; though it had been many years since they had first become a part of the Federation many of the Grel had chosen to stick with their roots despite the new comfortable life style among the federation available. Geglon (long believed to be the Grel's place of origin) became a haven for those who wished to live as their ancestors did, outside the bounds of the Federation.

Regrel grew up to become a fine hunter; at the age of 7 he'd already hunted and killed his first Leglon, a feet only achieved by the strongest of warriors. It wasn't long before the Tribe began to discuss Regrel's future as tribal leader, even though at the age of 12 he would be one of the youngest to take up the mantle in almost 50 years. This however was not to be. Despite the wishes of his parents and the tribe Regrel wished to travel the galaxy; he found the world of Geglon restricting.

Though many warned him that life in space was not all it was made out to be, Regrel soon took the long walk to the Federation port on Geglon and took a one way ticket to Prime.

Upon arriving in Prime Regrel soon found himself is a strange habitat and out of his depth. Grels where few and far between on Prime and those who did live there were so different from those of his home land that they where almost as alien to him as aliens themselves. The day to day life upon Prime was so different from anything he knew; hunting simply wasn't needed, trading was more common place, every need was met by metal men and the environment was stale and strange with little to nothing organic.

Regrel soon found that the only work he could find was in the Federation army; though they relied on fire arms and other newer technologies it was the closes thing to hunting he could find. Though at first cautious he found he had a knack with a certain technology in particular; Explosives. The Grels natural inventive nature allowed Regrel to gain an understanding of explosives that very few of other races could.

Regrel made quite a name for himself over the next five years. He rose quickly though the military ranks and soon became the main man to turn to if in need of a demoman that can get the job done. It was during one mission however that Regrels' life changed forever. While arming a door explosive during a drugs raid Regrel and his men where ambushed by several of the criminals. Distracted, Regrel slipped and the explosive he was arming detonated.

He would have died there and then if it wasn't for the Sentinel program. Regrels' missing body parts where replaced with Cybernetic enhancements; when he awoke he found that his arm had been replaced with a impressive prophetic limb and he now saw the world though one in eye in way's he never thought possible. Now Regrel has become a member of the legendary group known as the Sentinals, using his gift with exploisives to help his comrades in arms. [/spoiler]

I took a couple of libertys with the lore I know; I wasn't sure how long the Grels had been a part of the federation and what sort of technological state they where in when they where found so I invented an astroid where Grels lived out a more tribal life style, whether thats from just before they encountered the federation or whether it reflects their life style thousands of years ago is up to you.

I also added a horn and a tail to the Grels just because...well, I drew it and it looked cool. I notice he looks more like a horse than a rodent but that's unintended.

There may be certain things about this character that are over powering (he can cause a hell of a mess with some of thoughs grenades) but then I figured theres only going to be so many situations he can use them in; he can hardly set off a plasma grenade in a building, the whole place may fall on top of them.

Anyway, hope you like it.
 

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SomeBritishDude said:
Ok, character sheet below, with pictures and all.

[spoiler/] [b/]Name:[/b] Regrel (nick named "the Genii Pig")

[b/]Race:[/b] Grel

[b/]Age:[/b] 17

[b/]Gender:[/b] Male

[b/]Appearance:[/b] Regrel is tall for a Grel, standing at roughly 3'5. His hair is thick and coarse, a deep reddish brown. His snout is short with a large black leathy nose and wide horse like nostrils. On the end of this nose is a small Rhino like horn. Unusually for a Grel, Regrel has a white stripe of hair running from his eye line to the tip of his short tail. His ears are small with a stiff base and a floppy tip. His right eye is like that found on all Regrel; small, black and shiny. His other is a bright, electric blue.

[spoiler/][img/]http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/phishwithextracheese/Grel.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

[b/]Role:[/b] Demolitions Expert

[b/]Armour:[/b] Regrel wears state of the art, high endurance, rough terrain, heavy armour. Probably the closes thing I can find to it is this.

[spoiler/][img/]http://blog.media-freaks.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/free-adventure-games.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

The suit itself is obviously a lot smaller with no wings and has the basic colours of white with deep blue trim. The suit also has a built in force field that can be activated for short term invincibility to anything travelling faster than sound. However this shield is very short term only lasting up to half a minute for short sprints or attacks.

[b/]Cybernetics/Biotics:[/b] Regrel has been though several experimental Cybernetic enhancements, earning him in time the nickname of "the Genii Pig". His entire left arm and shoulder have been replaced with a fully robotic prosthetic limb, giving him enough strength in this arm to crush bones. His left eye has also been removed, replaced with one built for combat. With a built in scanner, optical zoom, night and heat vision in this one eye, Regrel is often able to access the battle field in mere seconds.

[b/]Weapons/Equipment:[/b] As his job Regrel often carries a large amount of explosive devices, be they be motion sensitive/remote detonated mines or hand held/sticky/heat and motion seeking grenades.

These explosives can be divided into three main categories; EMP (which whips out all electric equipment within the blast radius), OD or Organic Disintegrators (which destroy all organic matter within the blast radius) and Plasma (which are basically everyday explosive devices).

Along with these explosives Regrel always carried his trusty X13 grenade launcher. This grenade launcher is able to fire up to 8 explosive devices in close succession. Due to the ingenious grenade adaptation kit which comes with it, he is able to adapt most grenades to fit the ammo cylinders in under a minute, allowing for an almost limitless supply of ammo. The launcher is supplied with a minimum of 8 plasma grenades and sticky bombs for most missions. The X13 is equipped with a lock on targeting system and scope.

Regrel also carries a light weight double barrelled plasma shotgun at his hip at all times for close encounters. If all else fails, he always has a cybernetic arm that can crush a human skull with one good punch.

[spoiler/][img/]http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/phishwithextracheese/Demoweapons.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

[b/]Personality:[/b] On the battle field Regrel prefers the direct approach. Though he knows better than to disregard a direct order, negotiation and reasoning are not his style when he knows he can often take out a whole group with a well placed mine or single X13 shot. Regrel will always scan any battle situation using his cybernetic eye. He nearly always has a few options of how to fight his and his teams' way out of any situation.

Off the battlefield Regrel is slightly unsure of himself. While he had a strong place within Grel society he finds himself out of place in an environment that is for the most part alien, even after his amount of time away from home. He is quiet and has very little understandings of the emotions of other humanoids. The harsh conditions of the asteroid he originated from means that he finds it difficult on long space journeys where there is very little to do but relax, which is something he just isn't accustomed to.

Much like any animal Regrel is very difficult to read. For the most part his face is blank; expressions that would be shown with facial movements such as a smile for happiness or tears for sadness are express with subtle body movements for him. His voice is gruff and deep; his English is slightly limited due to its vast difference to Grel (Grels speak much like animals with prehistoric roars, howls and body movements). He'll often speak with short, to the point sentences. When he does it's never about trivial things such as his own feels on a situation or others, its important sentences such as "there's a monster behind you".

[b/]Bio: [/b]Regrel grew up on the comet Geglon, named Delteron IV by the federation. The people of Geglon lived almost a tribal state; though it had been many years since they had first become a part of the Federation many of the Grel had chosen to stick with their roots despite the new comfortable life style among the federation available. Geglon (long believed to be the Grel's place of origin) became a haven for those who wished to live as their ancestors did, outside the bounds of the Federation.

Regrel grew up to become a fine hunter; at the age of 7 he'd already hunted and killed his first Leglon, a feet only achieved by the strongest of warriors. It wasn't long before the Tribe began to discuss Regrel's future as tribal leader, even though at the age of 12 he would be one of the youngest to take up the mantle in almost 50 years. This however was not to be. Despite the wishes of his parents and the tribe Regrel wished to travel the galaxy; he found the world of Geglon restricting.

Though many warned him that life in space was not all it was made out to be, Regrel soon took the long walk to the Federation port on Geglon and took a one way ticket to Prime.

Upon arriving in Prime Regrel soon found himself is a strange habitat and out of his depth. Grels where few and far between on Prime and those who did live there were so different from those of his home land that they where almost as alien to him as aliens themselves. The day to day life upon Prime was so different from anything he knew; hunting simply wasn't needed, trading was more common place, every need was met by metal men and the environment was stale and strange with little to nothing organic.

Regrel soon found that the only work he could find was in the Federation army; though they relied on fire arms and other newer technologies it was the closes thing to hunting he could find. Though at first cautious he found he had a knack with a certain technology in particular; Explosives. The Grels natural inventive nature allowed Regrel to gain an understanding of explosives that very few of other races could.

Regrel made quite a name for himself over the next five years. He rose quickly though the military ranks and soon became the main man to turn to if in need of a demoman that can get the job done. It was during one mission however that Regrels' life changed forever. While arming a door explosive during a drugs raid Regrel and his men where ambushed by several of the criminals. Distracted, Regrel slipped and the explosive he was arming detonated.

He would have died there and then if it wasn't for the Sentinel program. Regrels' missing body parts where replaced with Cybernetic enhancements; when he awoke he found that his had been replaced with a impressive prophetic limb and he now saw the world though one in eye in way's he never thought possible. Now Regrel has become a member of the legendary group known as the Sentinals, using his gift with exploisives to help his comrades in arms. [/spoiler]
Nice, these sheets just keep on getting better.

Now, I just wait for the other reservations to be completed and I can start the selection.
 

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Exictednuke said:
SomeBritishDude said:
Ok, character sheet below, with pictures and all.

[spoiler/] [b/]Name:[/b] Regrel (nick named "the Genii Pig")

[b/]Race:[/b] Grel

[b/]Age:[/b] 17

[b/]Gender:[/b] Male

[b/]Appearance:[/b] Regrel is tall for a Grel, standing at roughly 3'5. His hair is thick and coarse, a deep reddish brown. His snout is short with a large black leathy nose and wide horse like nostrils. On the end of this nose is a small Rhino like horn. Unusually for a Grel, Regrel has a white stripe of hair running from his eye line to the tip of his short tail. His ears are small with a stiff base and a floppy tip. His right eye is like that found on all Regrel; small, black and shiny. His other is a bright, electric blue.

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[b/]Role:[/b] Demolitions Expert

[b/]Armour:[/b] Regrel wears state of the art, high endurance, rough terrain, heavy armour. Probably the closes thing I can find to it is this.

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The suit itself is obviously a lot smaller with no wings and has the basic colours of white with deep blue trim. The armour is reinforced with in a plasma resistant force field.

[b/]Cybernetics/Biotics:[/b] Regrel has been though several experimental Cybernetic enhancements, earning him in time the nickname of "the Genii Pig". His entire left arm and shoulder have been replaced with a fully robotic prosthetic limb, giving him enough strength in this arm to crush bones. His left eye has also been removed, replaced with one built for combat. With a built in scanner, optical zoom, night and heat vision in this one eye, Regrel is often able to access the battle field in mere seconds.

[b/]Weapons/Equipment:[/b] As his job Regrel often carries a large amount of explosive devices, be they be motion sensitive/remote detonated mines or hand held/sticky/heat and motion seeking grenades.

These explosives can be divided into three main categories; EMP (which whips out all electric equipment within the blast radius), OD or Organic Disintegrators (which destroy all organic matter within the blast radius) and Plasma (which are basically everyday explosive devices).

Along with these explosives Regrel always carried his trusty X13 grenade launcher. This grenade launcher is able to fire up to 8 explosive devices in close succession. Due to the ingenious grenade adaptation kit which comes with it, he is able to adapt most grenades to fit the ammo cylinders in under a minute, allowing for an almost limitless supply of ammo. The launcher is supplied with a minimum of 8 plasma grenades and sticky bombs for most missions. The X13 is equipped with a lock on targeting system and scope.

Regrel also carries a light weight double barrelled plasma shotgun at his hip at all times for close encounters. If all else fails, he always has a cybernetic arm that can crush a human skull with one good punch.

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[b/]Personality:[/b] On the battle field Regrel prefers the direct approach. Though he knows better than to disregard a direct order, negotiation and reasoning are not his style when he knows he can often take out a whole group with a well placed mine or single X13 shot. Regrel will always scan any battle situation using his cybernetic eye. He nearly always has a few options of how to fight his and his teams' way out of any situation.

Off the battlefield Regrel is slightly unsure of himself. While he had a strong place within Grel society he finds himself out of place in an environment that is for the most part alien, even after his amount of time away from home. He is quiet and has very little understandings of the emotions of other humanoids. The harsh conditions of the asteroid he originated from means that he finds it difficult on long space journeys where there is very little to do but relax, which is something he just isn't accustomed to.

Much like any animal Regrel is very difficult to read. For the most part his face is blank; expressions that would be shown with facial movements such as a smile for happiness or tears for sadness are express with subtle body movements for him. His voice is gruff and deep; his English is slightly limited due to its vast difference to Grel (Grels speak much like animals with prehistoric roars, howls and body movements). He'll often speak with short, to the point sentences. When he does it's never about trivial things such as his own feels on a situation or others, its important sentences such as "there's a monster behind you".

[b/]Bio: [/b]Regrel grew up on the comet Geglon, named Delteron IV by the federation. The people of Geglon lived almost a tribal state; though it had been many years since they had first become a part of the Federation many of the Grel had chosen to stick with their roots despite the new comfortable life style among the federation available. Geglon (long believed to be the Grel's place of origin) became a haven for those who wished to live as their ancestors did, outside the bounds of the Federation.

Regrel grew up to become a fine hunter; at the age of 7 he'd already hunted and killed his first Leglon, a feet only achieved by the strongest of warriors. It wasn't long before the Tribe began to discuss Regrel's future as tribal leader, even though at the age of 12 he would be one of the youngest to take up the mantle in almost 50 years. This however was not to be. Despite the wishes of his parents and the tribe Regrel wished to travel the galaxy; he found the world of Geglon restricting.

Though many warned him that life in space was not all it was made out to be, Regrel soon took the long walk to the Federation port on Geglon and took a one way ticket to Prime.

Upon arriving in Prime Regrel soon found himself is a strange habitat and out of his depth. Grels where few and far between on Prime and those who did live there were so different from those of his home land that they where almost as alien to him as aliens themselves. The day to day life upon Prime was so different from anything he knew; hunting simply wasn't needed, trading was more common place, every need was met by metal men and the environment was stale and strange with little to nothing organic.

Regrel soon found that the only work he could find was in the Federation army; though they relied on fire arms and other newer technologies it was the closes thing to hunting he could find. Though at first cautious he found he had a knack with a certain technology in particular; Explosives. The Grels natural inventive nature allowed Regrel to gain an understanding of explosives that very few of other races could.

Regrel made quite a name for himself over the next five years. He rose quickly though the military ranks and soon became the main man to turn to if in need of a demoman that can get the job done. It was during one mission however that Regrels' life changed forever. While arming a door explosive during a drugs raid Regrel and his men where ambushed by several of the criminals. Distracted, Regrel slipped and the explosive he was arming detonated.

He would have died there and then if it wasn't for the Sentinel program. Regrels' missing body parts where replaced with Cybernetic enhancements; when he awoke he found that his had been replaced with a impressive prophetic limb and he now saw the world though one in eye in way's he never thought possible. Now Regrel has become a member of the legendary group known as the Sentinals, using his gift with exploisives to help his comrades in arms. [/spoiler]
Nice, these sheets just keep on getting better.

Now, I just wait for the other reservations to be completed and I can start the selection.
Great, see you in game. Cybernetic eyes are all the range is seems, but whatever, I can't think of anything better :)
 

Jav3lin

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I thought I might add a picture of my swords here :D I'm changing my swords to look kind of different, I'll change the sheet, no problem :D

 

ThreeWords

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Hey Nuke, do you want me to change to negotiator instead? I'd be happy to, and even more so if it speeds up the start...
 

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ThreeWords said:
Hey Nuke, do you want me to change to negotiator instead? I'd be happy to, and even more so if it speeds up the start...
Stick with the mechanic, we have a reserve for the negotiator.

And I'll start after I narrow down the list, until then feel free to make edits.
 

Yorgmiester

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Finally got it done! :)
Name: Vfraar

Race: Talonisk

Age: 151

Gender: Male

Appearance: Eight foot, two inches, dark reddish-brown scales. Eye's usually some shade of green. Thick, muscly body covered in scars from previous battles. Both legs are biotic below the knees. A long, rippling scar runs down the side of his tail, which ends several inches shorter than it should in a titanium serrated cap. He stands with an air of cool contemplation and governing calm, which demands respect from those around him.

Role: Combat Commander

Armor: Vfraar's armor is an advanced model of the T5 Commander armor system. It contains systems for tracking and locating troops and enemies, mapping out environments, listing statistics and storing previous tactics and logistics for future use. The chest and torso pieces are made of high-impact heavy sralium, which offers resistence against high-velocity projectiles, high-pressure explosions, and heavy plasma absorbtion. The arms and legs are made of lighter, less durable material, to provide greater movement and flexibility.

The helmet itself has two modes; overseer and comabt. In overseer mode, the helmet appears to simply be a large, metallic headset that fits around his neck, with an earpiece and built-in mic. In this mode, Nazar's newly developed "Air HUD" system sends combat information and images into the invisible sensory feild in front of his face, so that he can view the battle without needing a screen or visor. In combat mode, protective plates slide up out of the neckpiece and around his head, complete with a visor which replaces the Air Hud system.

Cybernetics/Biotics: Along with standard reflex and agility enhancing cybernetics, Vfraar's body contains a special cybernetic that regulates his heart rate, blood pressure, and respitory systems. This sysetm keeps him calm and in control at all times, as it was found long ago that he had heart and respiritory issues(He almost died during a battle once, at the young age of 54, because of a heart attack, and it was because of this that he was moved from basic infantry to begin training for leadership positions). There are also several neural triggers attached to his brain, the reason for which will be explained below.

Due to a failed transmission and a well-aimed Sarason Grenade, both his legs are biotic below the knee. They're modeled to look like Talonisk feet, with claws that can be elongated at will(see neural triggers).

Weaponry/Equipment: Vfraar's primary ranged weapon is the MN7-Reverb, a mid-weight automatic plasma weapon about the size of a human assault rifle(scaled up for Talonisk, of course). It's shots are designed to inflict maximum surface damage, instead of maximum penetration, so when they hit unarmored or lightly armored targets, they'll cause much more widespread damage to tissue and musclues, instead of simply passing through. Against armor, it's not quite as effective, unless the armor is high-velocity mold armor, in which case the Reverb shots will cause more damage to the armor itself then a penetrating shot would.

His main melee weapon, the SenStick, is a flexible titanium sash, that drapes over one shoulder or around the neck. Upon being triggered by one of his neural receptors, it hardens into a long, oblong oar type shape that can be used either as a bludgeoning weapon or a sheild. He also carries a titanium knife and a plasma pistol.

Personality: Vfraar is a Talonisk soldier through and through. He is brave, cunning, and able-bodied, with a feirce sense of pride and honor. The many troops he had commanded over the years have always respected him, not only because of his in-grained sense of leadership and duty, but because he has earned their respected through his attitude and actions. He treats them as they ought to be treated, respects them like a brother when they should be respected and beats them into the ground with an iron fist when they need to be beaten. His tactical mind and experienced foresight have saved the lives of thousands of soldeirs.

In domestic interaction, his demeanor is cool and calm. He rarely gets angry, instead preffering to quietly put the opposition in their place through intimidation and an icy tongue. Vfraar enjoys talking, which is unexpected from a Talonisk. He respects Nazar for their intelect and savy, Grel for their rock-hard resolve and strength, and humans for their... nevermind. He doesn't really respect humans that much. They have better senses of humor than the other races, but not much else going for them. If anything, he respects their determination to continue on in a world where everyone else is better than them.

Bio: Born on the Talonisk colony world of Beroral, Vfraar lived a simple lifestyle working at a deepwater cren fishery on a lake near the outer settlement. Ships would stop by once in a while to bring the colony supplies, but mostly they were isolated from the rest of the Fedaration. That was, until a sabotaged cruiser containing several high-up government officials was forced to crash-land on the planet. Pirates pursued them, and since the planet was so far from any high-population worlds, a very long and bloody chase ensued across the major continent. Eventually the oficials made it to the settlement, with the help of the locals, and a battle took place. The pirates were eventually beaten off, long before official reinforcements could arrive, and the planet suddenly became a galactic tourist attraction. Vfraar had the opportunity to see the galazxy now, without having to stow way on a barge freighter.

The galaxy proved to be very unforgiving, and through a series of unfortnuate events, Vfraar ended up enrolling in the military. He took part in many glorious battles as a small time grunt, until his superiors noticed his skills and began pushing him up the ranks. But it wasn't until he almost died from a heart attack during a particulary close battle that they decided to put him in a real leadership role. He excelled at it. Battles and wars were won under his call, and soon he was given prime commands over vast battalions of soldiers. Many a glorious victory was tucked away beneath his belt. So, at the ripe age of 151, when he was asked (not assigned, mind you) to take a combat commanding position in the crew of the Sentinal's new flagship, the Great White, he accepted.

I'm assuming the Great White is the spaceship we'll be on?