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Nukey

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Xero Scythe said:
Ha Ha! I am finished!

Name: Lucia Tenebris

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Appearance: at 6? 5?, Lucia has blonde, spiky hair and ice-cold blue eyes. He weighs in at 190, due to the intense military regiment he went through. He has a scar running from his right eyebrow to his chin. Caucasian.
Role: Special Operations
Armor: New ?Meteor Mk. III? Armor. Lightweight, but made of a new composite alloy to deflect bullets easier. Feet and arms have small rocket boosters to increase speed. However, the armor requires an insane reaction time, making it for the most part useless. Targeting recticle is available on the helmet, synchronizing with the weapon using electromagnetic fields. The armor is midnight- black, taking as little space as possible. Looks somewhat like plate armor, with the overlapping segments.

Cybernetics/Biotics:
Reaction time- Lucia has an implant that increases his reaction time to .1, making him one of the only people who can use the Meteor armor.
Energy Force- Lucia can charge objects with energy, making them explode violently. He can also make bullets out of the energy, effectively turning any weapon into a Railgun, but very few weapons are able to take the amount of energy the bullets discharge upon firing, making the weapon useless after only a few shots.
Musculature and skeletal density have been increased to keep up with the reaction time.

Weapons: 2 .45 Magnums are at his hips at all times. Lucia also carries multiple knives, hidden on his person. The only automatic weapon Lucia carried is a P90. He hates the gun.
Personality: Lucia is extremely charismatic and easygoing. As a friend once said, ?Lucia could make friends with the devil. But when the bullets start flying, the devil better watch out.? Lucia will do whatever it takes to accomplish the goal. Being raised up to be tolerant, Lucia has no problems about working with the other species.

Bio: Born on Aeolia, Lucia was brought up by one of the richest families in the world. Until the age of 13, he was brought up with everything a child could hope for, yet staying unspoiled by some miracle. Until that fateful day, Friday, April 13th, 2505, when his homeworld was destroyed by the Verev. Lucia only just escaped death, being pushed into the escape pod just as he saw his parents cut down by the Verev. The pod took off, saving Lucia?s life. He was rescued by a fighter ship that had noticed his pod only by mere chance, saving him and taking him back to the Prime.

The man?s name was Damien. Lucia did everything that would increase his chances of beating the Verev. Often he could be found on the shooting range, not leaving for 3 days, hitting his target every single time. Then the news hit:

Damien had been killed in action by the Verev.

This pushed Lucia over the edge. He turned to science to give him the tools to exact revenge. The scientists used revolutionary technologies, increasing his reaction time to the max, increasing his musculature and bone density to handle the stress, and giving him the ability to charge energy into objects, making them more explosive than C-4. Lucia often joked that fate was an Indian giver, but in his heart, he knew it to be true. It was time to take what was his back.
I don't think a P90 would be useful when in oxygen free environments, and plasma based weaponry is the norm so the majority of gun powder based ballistics no longer exist. That and there are weapons with far less recoil then a .45 sporting a stronger round with the same size.

Keep in mind, this far into the future every gun we have came to know is no longer in use. So I'm expecting to see some original designs.
 

Nukey

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Sentinel10 said:
Okay, our squad has three mechanics. Yeah, I think I'm gonna change mine...
Now we have three snipers, may I recommend you be a Grel using heavy weapons.
 

Nukey

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ThreeWords said:
Exictednuke said:
ThreeWords said:
Good good. How weird can my sheet be? (Like, can we deviate from standard humanity, and if so, how much?)
Seeing as we are dwelling with soft science fiction and technobabble it can be very weird, just don't go making 'Manbearpig' or some other animal thingy.

[sup]I'm sorry but I doubt Granth can pilot a ship.[/sup]
Fair enough, here's someone to fit in a little more

I'm going to assume a few things about law and custom, hokay?

Name: ARNP-1614181/Jonathon Shannow

Race: Legally human (see Bio)

Age: 4 years (see bio)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jon is moderately tall, and passably handsome, with longish ginger hair and blue-grey eyes that are by turns warm and startlingly cold. Physically he is slim and lithe, with decent but not massive muscles.

Bio: The original Jonathan Shannow remains much of a mystery, but his relationship to the ARNP-1614181 is, at base, quite simple. ARNP-1614181 is a simulacrum built to resemble Jon in every way, programmed with something resembling his memories and given sufficient information to appear to have his memories, then sent out or used in Jon's stead. ARNP-1614181 was used to fill for Jon's normal life (with a wife and family) while he went off, often for weeks on end, though where he went is unknown. After several years of ARNP-1614181's use, Jon failed to return, and eventually ARNP-1614181's true identity was discovered. It is assumed that Jon was living some kind of double life, and either gave up on his marries life at last, or died in some shady circumstance.
Filled with shock, Jon's wife separated from ARNP-1614181 and tried to have it deactivated, but it was able to find a skilled attorney, and managed to prove it was sufficiently related to and resembling Jon, and had been operating for so long under it's own discretion, that it was legally entitled to inherit Jon's position and assume his life. It's, or now legally his, wife still divorce4d him, though the children claimed to see no difference, and slowly the once couple have become tentative friends.
Seeking some kind of purpose, ARNP-1614181, now thinking of itself as Jon Shannow, enrolled in the military, an left the planet in the hope of serving his race and doing his duty.

Role: Combat mechanic, able to hold his own in fighting but mainly a support unit, repairing and fixing his allies

Armor: The lightest available power armour, providing decent protection while allowing freedom of movement. It jacks into his nervous system, giving him a sense of touch even through the metal plates, and does not restrict his movement

Cybernetics/Biotics: As a simulacrum, Jon has no biotics, but of course has extensive cybernetics. He possesses circuits inside his head allowing direct connection to computers and a built in HUD, and thought based subether communication, zoomable eyes with nightvision attachments. His entire body is mechanical, so he is vastly stronger than he looks, and has far better relflexes

Weaponry/Equipment: A pair of pistols modeled on ancient revolvers, firing plasma charges loaded by means of a revolving chamber, though they fire much faster and can be reloaded with one movement.
he also has a detachable thumb, which is launched on a superfine monofilament wire and swung with the intent to cut through things cheesewire-style. It is mainly useful as a surprise weapon, though alsohs more practical uses.

Personality: Jon still resembles the originals personality, being warm and frenidly, a man easy to like and hard to hate, though since the programming was not entirely perfect, sometimes a mechanicle side shows, being cold calculating and harsh.
Now I'm tempted to make a part in the codex about legal rights for machines, well done.
 

Xero Scythe

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Exictednuke said:
Xero Scythe said:
Ha Ha! I am finished!

Name: Lucia Tenebris

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Appearance: at 6? 5?, Lucia has blonde, spiky hair and ice-cold blue eyes. He weighs in at 190, due to the intense military regiment he went through. He has a scar running from his right eyebrow to his chin. Caucasian.
Role: Special Operations
Armor: New ?Meteor Mk. III? Armor. Lightweight, but made of a new composite alloy to deflect bullets easier. Feet and arms have small rocket boosters to increase speed. However, the armor requires an insane reaction time, making it for the most part useless. Targeting recticle is available on the helmet, synchronizing with the weapon using electromagnetic fields. The armor is midnight- black, taking as little space as possible. Looks somewhat like plate armor, with the overlapping segments.

Cybernetics/Biotics:
Reaction time- Lucia has an implant that increases his reaction time to .1, making him one of the only people who can use the Meteor armor.
Energy Force- Lucia can charge objects with energy, making them explode violently. He can also make bullets out of the energy, effectively turning any weapon into a Railgun, but very few weapons are able to take the amount of energy the bullets discharge upon firing, making the weapon useless after only a few shots.
Musculature and skeletal density have been increased to keep up with the reaction time.

Weapons: 2 .45 Magnums are at his hips at all times. Lucia also carries multiple knives, hidden on his person. The only automatic weapon Lucia carried is a P90. He hates the gun.
Personality: Lucia is extremely charismatic and easygoing. As a friend once said, ?Lucia could make friends with the devil. But when the bullets start flying, the devil better watch out.? Lucia will do whatever it takes to accomplish the goal. Being raised up to be tolerant, Lucia has no problems about working with the other species.

Bio: Born on Aeolia, Lucia was brought up by one of the richest families in the world. Until the age of 13, he was brought up with everything a child could hope for, yet staying unspoiled by some miracle. Until that fateful day, Friday, April 13th, 2505, when his homeworld was destroyed by the Verev. Lucia only just escaped death, being pushed into the escape pod just as he saw his parents cut down by the Verev. The pod took off, saving Lucia?s life. He was rescued by a fighter ship that had noticed his pod only by mere chance, saving him and taking him back to the Prime.

The man?s name was Damien. Lucia did everything that would increase his chances of beating the Verev. Often he could be found on the shooting range, not leaving for 3 days, hitting his target every single time. Then the news hit:

Damien had been killed in action by the Verev.

This pushed Lucia over the edge. He turned to science to give him the tools to exact revenge. The scientists used revolutionary technologies, increasing his reaction time to the max, increasing his musculature and bone density to handle the stress, and giving him the ability to charge energy into objects, making them more explosive than C-4. Lucia often joked that fate was an Indian giver, but in his heart, he knew it to be true. It was time to take what was his back.
I don't think a P90 would be useful when in oxygen free environments, and plasma based weaponry is the norm so the majority of gun powder based ballistics no longer exist. That and there are weapons with far less recoil then a .45 sporting a stronger round with the same size.

Keep in mind, this far into the future every gun we have came to know is no longer in use. So I'm expecting to see some original designs.
yeah, sorry. I've had a bit of writer's block while writing this. Completely slipped my mind. Anyway, fixed.
 

ThreeWords

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Exictednuke said:
ThreeWords said:
Exictednuke said:
ThreeWords said:
Good good. How weird can my sheet be? (Like, can we deviate from standard humanity, and if so, how much?)
Seeing as we are dwelling with soft science fiction and technobabble it can be very weird, just don't go making 'Manbearpig' or some other animal thingy.

[sup]I'm sorry but I doubt Granth can pilot a ship.[/sup]
Fair enough, here's someone to fit in a little more

I'm going to assume a few things about law and custom, hokay?

Name: ARNP-1614181/Jonathon Shannow

Race: Legally human (see Bio)

Age: 4 years (see bio)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jon is moderately tall, and passably handsome, with longish ginger hair and blue-grey eyes that are by turns warm and startlingly cold. Physically he is slim and lithe, with decent but not massive muscles.

Bio: The original Jonathan Shannow remains much of a mystery, but his relationship to the ARNP-1614181 is, at base, quite simple. ARNP-1614181 is a simulacrum built to resemble Jon in every way, programmed with something resembling his memories and given sufficient information to appear to have his memories, then sent out or used in Jon's stead. ARNP-1614181 was used to fill for Jon's normal life (with a wife and family) while he went off, often for weeks on end, though where he went is unknown. After several years of ARNP-1614181's use, Jon failed to return, and eventually ARNP-1614181's true identity was discovered. It is assumed that Jon was living some kind of double life, and either gave up on his marries life at last, or died in some shady circumstance.
Filled with shock, Jon's wife separated from ARNP-1614181 and tried to have it deactivated, but it was able to find a skilled attorney, and managed to prove it was sufficiently related to and resembling Jon, and had been operating for so long under it's own discretion, that it was legally entitled to inherit Jon's position and assume his life. It's, or now legally his, wife still divorce4d him, though the children claimed to see no difference, and slowly the once couple have become tentative friends.
Seeking some kind of purpose, ARNP-1614181, now thinking of itself as Jon Shannow, enrolled in the military, an left the planet in the hope of serving his race and doing his duty.

Role: Combat mechanic, able to hold his own in fighting but mainly a support unit, repairing and fixing his allies

Armor: The lightest available power armour, providing decent protection while allowing freedom of movement. It jacks into his nervous system, giving him a sense of touch even through the metal plates, and does not restrict his movement

Cybernetics/Biotics: As a simulacrum, Jon has no biotics, but of course has extensive cybernetics. He possesses circuits inside his head allowing direct connection to computers and a built in HUD, and thought based subether communication, zoomable eyes with nightvision attachments. His entire body is mechanical, so he is vastly stronger than he looks, and has far better relflexes

Weaponry/Equipment: A pair of pistols modeled on ancient revolvers, firing plasma charges loaded by means of a revolving chamber, though they fire much faster and can be reloaded with one movement.
he also has a detachable thumb, which is launched on a superfine monofilament wire and swung with the intent to cut through things cheesewire-style. It is mainly useful as a surprise weapon, though alsohs more practical uses.

Personality: Jon still resembles the originals personality, being warm and frenidly, a man easy to like and hard to hate, though since the programming was not entirely perfect, sometimes a mechanicle side shows, being cold calculating and harsh.
Now I'm tempted to make a part in the codex about legal rights for machines, well done.
Ideas meet, collide, and spawn new and weirder ones =D
 

Nukey

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Sentinel10 said:
Exictednuke said:
Sentinel10 said:
Okay, our squad has three mechanics. Yeah, I think I'm gonna change mine...
Now we have three snipers, may I recommend you be a Grel using heavy weapons.
Which is exactly what I have done.
He's a little tall for a Grel don't you think...Their more like four feet at the max.
 

TheSentinel

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Exictednuke said:
Sentinel10 said:
Exictednuke said:
Sentinel10 said:
Okay, our squad has three mechanics. Yeah, I think I'm gonna change mine...
Now we have three snipers, may I recommend you be a Grel using heavy weapons.
Which is exactly what I have done.
He's a little tall for a Grel don't you think...Their more like four feet at the max.
Would 4 and a half feet be okay? He is a BIG Grel.
 

Nukey

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Sentinel10 said:
Exictednuke said:
Sentinel10 said:
Exictednuke said:
Sentinel10 said:
Okay, our squad has three mechanics. Yeah, I think I'm gonna change mine...
Now we have three snipers, may I recommend you be a Grel using heavy weapons.
Which is exactly what I have done.
He's a little tall for a Grel don't you think...Their more like four feet at the max.
Would 4 and a half feet be okay? He is a BIG Grel.
I suppose that could do.
 

Nukey

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TheGreatCoolEnergy said:
I'm still the only medic right? I would be following a bit closer but I have this project I've been workin on
Yep, you're the only medic.
 

SomeBritishDude

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Reserving spot. Guaranteed alien, weighing up Grel and Nazar. On that note, I get Nazar are basically fish men, but apart from them being small, leather colored and hairy what exactly do Grel look like? Are they basically small walruses or some sort of weird rodent thing? Can you do a picture?
 

Nukey

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SomeBritishDude said:
Reserving spot. Guaranteed alien, weighing up Grel and Nazar. On that note, I get Nazar are basically fish men, but apart from them being small, leather colored and hairy what exactly do Grel look like? Are they basically small walruses or some sort of weird rodent thing? Can you do a picture?
[sup]*This is what I get for not knowing how to draw*[/sup]

Rodent like would be the right way to describe them, seeing as I sort of had the capybara [http://johnnyslick.files.wordpress.com/2009/09/capybara.jpg] in mind, you know with a snout and what not. But for build I suppose the Volus [http://xbox-mag.net/upload/articles/63931.Volus.jpg] from mass effect are the perfect example of their of their body shape, short and fat. My best guess would be to just put the capybara head on the Volus body and you basically have what the Grel look like.
 

SomeBritishDude

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Exictednuke said:
SomeBritishDude said:
Reserving spot. Guaranteed alien, weighing up Grel and Nazar. On that note, I get Nazar are basically fish men, but apart from them being small, leather colored and hairy what exactly do Grel look like? Are they basically small walruses or some sort of weird rodent thing? Can you do a picture?
[sup]*This is what I get for not knowing how to draw*[/sup]

Rodent like would be the right way to describe them, seeing as I sort of had the capybara [http://johnnyslick.files.wordpress.com/2009/09/capybara.jpg] in mind, you know with a snout and what not. But for build I suppose the Volus [http://xbox-mag.net/upload/articles/63931.Volus.jpg] from mass effect are the perfect example of their of their body shape, short and fat. My best guess would be to just put the capybara head on the Volus body and you basically have what the Grel look like.
They sound...adorable honestly. You know, as super strong humanoid rodents go.

I'll have a bio up by tomorrow, lightly with a picture if I can.
 

arashka

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Before I start making my application, I was just wondering if you have a pilot yet?
 

arashka

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If you don't have a Pilot I will be happy to take up the mantle. It would be my honor! *salute*
 

Nukey

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arashka said:
Before I start making my application, I was just wondering if you have a pilot yet?
A pilot will not be necessary for the most part, seeing as all the combat will either be taking place on the ground or inside a space ship. However the roles that are needed are as followed...

-Scout
-Demolitions
-Interrogation/Negotiation (Recommended for those who can reason well.)
-Basic Infantry (Why the hell did no one realize this yet!?)

And don't worry about the selection to much, it's really just there to scare people into making good sheets. Alot of sheets I have received so far are going to make it, the only one in danger is from the person refusing to make the proper edits.
 

arashka

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arashka said:
Before I start making my application, I was just wondering if you have a pilot yet?
A pilot will not be necessary for the most part, seeing as all the combat will either be taking place on the ground or inside a space ship. However the roles that are needed are as followed...

-Scout
-Demolitions
-Interrogation/Negotiation (Recommended for those who can reason well.)
-Basic Infantry (Why the hell did no one realize this yet!?)

And don't worry about the selection to much, it's really just there to scare people into making good sheets. Alot of sheets I have received so far are going to make it, the only one in danger is from the person refusing to make the proper edits.
Okay thanks for telling me before I started my application, unfortunately it's time to rest for me but I'm gonna start writing it as soon as I can. I'll probably just be basic infantry or negotiation. Once again, thanks!
 

Xero Scythe

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Exictednuke said:
arashka said:
Before I start making my application, I was just wondering if you have a pilot yet?
A pilot will not be necessary for the most part, seeing as all the combat will either be taking place on the ground or inside a space ship. However the roles that are needed are as followed...

-Scout
-Demolitions
-Interrogation/Negotiation (Recommended for those who can reason well.)
-Basic Infantry (Why the hell did no one realize this yet!?)

And don't worry about the selection to much, it's really just there to scare people into making good sheets. Alot of sheets I have received so far are going to make it, the only one in danger is from the person refusing to make the proper edits.
I think Lucia would count as Demolitions with his cybernetics.

also, by any chance is the person you are referring to as refusing to edit me? I already edited my sheet.