This is still an iffy series for me. There are some things I genuinely like, I really enjoy the duality between the real and fantasy world, I just don't think we see enough of the fantasy world.
We still know little to anything about the main characters. You've already introduced two new characters and tossed them out just as quickly as they came in. We have yet to see any true characterization from any of the main characters. I can see some real clever things to do, like the elf hunter guy is quick witted in real life as he is in the fantasy, and the warrior dude is as slow as well. Or even switch it up, instead making the elf hunter slow-witted in real life and the warrior dude a fast wise-cracker, could show how they want to escape reality or something.
Let us know the characters first. How are we supposed to know that Cewendywn (or howeverthehell you spell it) loves chocolate (***** stole her chocolate, after all)? how did the guy get a girlfriend in the first place? And for that matter, if the girlfriend was a *****, why would she be there in the first place?
And what of the fantasy world? It's okay if it's "generic fantasy setting #532", but are there any villages in there? Towns? Other NPCs? I don't expect this series to really go that far, I don't think it has that much production values, but it'd be an interesting situation.
Overall, I just don't feel it. There are a ton of good ideas in this series but I get the feeling that they're being restrained in favor of safer, more easy situations.
Also, if you can, try to back up and get a bit more room to capture more of the person on camera. It feels like you're trying to squeeze them into the camera, so when it shows the forest it feels unnecessarily cramped. Get some bigger shots in there if that's possible for your equipment, but that's a minor grievance.
Again, I say all this because I want this series to improve. I see an enormous amount of potential that I want tapped, I'm just afraid that it won't be utilized.
And that Keyblade was awesome, wouldn't mind some odd crossovers from things that shouldn't belong. Could be a scavenger hunt!