The artist in thee
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That would be Trilby and Co. from Yahtzee's Five Days a Stranger series.Beltom1066 said:I've been working on vector drawing and this is the latest thing I've made (my avatar is another thing I made a while back). A cookie to the person who recognises the characters.
I'll happily take your cookie off your hands.
Rightyo, "gives cookie"zoozilla said:That would be Trilby and Co. from Yahtzee's Five Days a Stranger series.Beltom1066 said:I've been working on vector drawing and this is the latest thing I've made (my avatar is another thing I made a while back). A cookie to the person who recognises the characters.
I'll happily take your cookie off your hands.
While your characters and lighting are well done, the background needs some work. The perspective is very odd looking and due to a limited colour palette it becomes difficult to see what is close and what is far at certain points (this issue could be solved really easily simply by washing out certain colours in the backround). Also, as a possibility, if you want it too look really atmospheric with the lighting, the bronzes in the background could be almost completely replaced by yellows in the highlights, fading into greens. It would give more of the impression that the big orb is the sole light source of that area of the piece which would provide a better sense of atmosphere and could solve some of the contrast issues going on. Otherwise, very cool, I look forward to seeing more from you. Your characters in particular are very well done.Calibretto said:SOmething im working on and close to finish!
any thoughts/comments welcome
Bear in mind I don't expect you to follow any of my instructions, just take them as possible things you could do either later or in future pieces. Also I never like coming off sounding condescending so if I came off that way please say so.
just wondering if the pictures have to be 100% original, as in, what if you just edited a picture? would i still be able to post mine here XD its the only thing i can do
ok then =D
mine are photo manipulation, basically i tried to combine 2 images into one
the ones ive "made" are the ones in the middle
(the pictures are pretty big, so beware)
didnt feel like doing the wings XD
mine are photo manipulation, basically i tried to combine 2 images into one
the ones ive "made" are the ones in the middle
(the pictures are pretty big, so beware
)
didnt feel like doing the wings XD
