That is genius - if Douglas Adams were alive today, he'd either write that or highly respect it.reg42 said:Ok well I posted these in the "part 2" thread because I didn't realise this one was still going, so...
A baby girl is mysteriously dropped off at an orphanage in Cleveland in 1945. "Jane" grows up
lonely and dejected, not knowing who her parents are, until one day in 1963 she is strangely
attracted to a drifter. She falls in love with him, but just when things are looking up for
Jane a series of disasters strikes: First, she becomes pregnant by the drifter, who then
disappears. Second, during the complicated delivery doctors discover that Jane has both sets
of sex organs, and to save her life, they most surgically convert "her" to a "him." Finally,
a mysterious stranger kidnaps her baby from the delivery room.
Reeling from these disasters, rejected from society, scorned by fate, "he" becomes a drunkard
and a drifter. Not only has Jane lost her parents and her lover, but he has lost his only
child as well. Years later, in 1970, he stumbles into a lonely bar, called Pop's Place, and
spills out his pathetic story to an elderly bartender. The sympathetic bartender offers the
drifter the chance to avenge the stranger who left her pregnant and abandoned, on the
condition that he join the "time traveller corps." Both of them enter a time machine and the
bartender drops the drifter off in 1963. The drifter is strangely attracted to a young orphan
girl, who subsequently becomes pregnant.
The bartender then goes forward 9 months, kidnaps the baby girl from the hospital, and drops
the baby off in an orphanage back in 1945. Then the bartender drops off the thoroughly
confused drifter in 1985, to enlist in the time traveller corps. The drifter eventually gets
his life together and becomes respected and elderly member of the time traveller corps, and
then disguises himself as a bartender and has his most difficult mission: a date with
destiny, meeting a certain drifter at Pop's Place in 1970.
FUCK YOU. I checked to make sure it wasn't a .gif file before examining the picture (as I've learned to do with those kinds of pictures) and yet it was still a fucking screamer.Stormz said:When you see it...
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I'm too chicken-shit to find out, what is it?U71L7Y_F0RMUL4 said:Well done, that did give me quite a shock. I even swore a bit at that one.S.R.S. said:Go to ED and search creepy pasta.
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I was actually kind of scared watching that. Then I laughed because it wasn't what I thought it was.Tdc2182 said:
Behold
Tobuscus
You do know that chicken-shit is a term in the military for an unfair officer/drill sergeant etc right?LastMondaysHangover said:I'm too chicken-shit to find out, what is it?U71L7Y_F0RMUL4 said:Well done, that did give me quite a shock. I even swore a bit at that one.S.R.S. said:Go to ED and search creepy pasta.
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That creeped me out. Not the story, but the fact that I clicked on it to create a window of the youtube page, which usually pauses the video. Instead the video continued and it created this freaky echo that I was not expecting.Tdc2182 said:
Behold
Tobuscus
I would still say shes pretty, it seems like saying no would be insulting and I don't like insulting creepy people.Haseo21 said:Have I got a story for you!
The Slit-mouth Women.....Kuchisake-onna
During the feudal era of Japan, a Samuri suspected that his very attractive wife was sleeping with another man (she wasnt). He cut the sides of her mouth to reach the bottom of each ear (she was given a Glasgow Smile). Present day-Her ghost wanders the cities of Eastern Asia. She appears to you if you are alone at night wearing fashionable clothes and a surgical mask to hide the cuts. She will ask people if she is pretty, most people reply yes, she will take of the surgical mask and ask if shed is still pretty......most cases they will reply no. She will then proceed to cut your mouth like hers with scissors or follow you and kill you on your doorstep. In other renditions, it is said if you reply yes after she takes the surgical mask off, she will give you a blood-soaked ruby.
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Nice, dude. But I'd recommend reading through this thread before posting stories, because I've already seen the third and the last one here.Dr.Poisonfreak said:The phone rings. I run to get it, thinking it may be my dad, coming to rescue me from Myrlie's house and tell me everything about Elizabeth and then everything would be alright. Mom would stop crying, Elizabeth would just be some girl Mom knew during childhood, and everything would be alright.
I finally reach the phone. "Oh, Elizabeth!" the person on the other end cries. It's not my dad. It's mom.
"Mom? This is Bethany. Not Elizabeth."
"Oh, Elizabeth, you silly girl! Is this one of your made up aliases? Listen, Elizabeth, I've called to say good-bye."
"Mom? This isn't Elizabeth. This is Bethany. What are you talking about?"
"Elizabeth! I know you're a little doped up on the medicine the hospital's been giving you. Ever since the crash I've been knowing exactly what would happen."
"Mom, you're scaring me, please," I beg. But mom will not listen.
"I wanted to say good-bye, to tell you that I loved you, even though you're not the same, and that you will be with us again soon after you...pass away."
"Mom? Is that you? Mom, please! Tell me what you're talking about!" I cry
"We've saved some of your cells, and we'll make an exact copy of you. There are only a few left so the next one will have to be the last. It'll be like it never even happened, Lizzy!" Joy is amidst in her voice.
There was a long silence on the phone. "What do you mean?" I whisper.
"Oh, Elizabeth, you'll be alive once more, you'll look exactly the same. So will Mommy and Daddy. Your thirteenth birthday has come, and you will die tonight, just like all the others. I love you so much, sweetie. Myrlie will give you your poison, then the next one will can be started." Then she hangs up, leaving me with the haunting monotone "boooop" noise.
My heart is racing. I hear Myrlie's footsteps. I skirt out of the kitchen and run out front. That's when I notice that the doormat is gone. Written in chalk in all capital letters is: "BETHANY: Place of figs; a town of resurrection." Then, "DIGISPUR CLONING."
The next feeling I feel is a piercing ache, silver bullet in the brain.
.....
"Oh, she's beautiful, what will you name her?" the nurse says.
"I don't know. I have a good feeling about this one, perhaps Elizabeth."
Have you ever had an experience that suggested someone else was in your house, and just thought ?I don?t wanna know? and left it? Sometimes, fear of the unknown just seems like the preferable option than facing a real, concrete danger. Normally it?s nothing, though. One time, the beeper function of my wireless housephone went off, when I was the only one home. It could only be called from the living room. Another time, I swear someone took some change from my desk. They?re all probably just slightly disconcerting tricks of the memory.
But what would you do when something truly suggestive happens? Would you run, or just ignore it, like I did?
Last Monday was a normal day. I got up, brushed my teeth, changed into school clothes? All little parts of my morning ritual. It seemed like it would be another totally un-noteworthy day, until I saw the strings.
There were three or four thick twine strings in my room. They criss-crossed between the walls around my bed, one attached to the door. No way would I have missed them before; I should have tripped over them. They were tied to pins in the walls, which had also not existed before ten seconds ago.
Nobody could have been in my room while I was in it, let alone set this up. It was early, and my brain wasn?t processing correctly. I simply discredited the sight, untied the strings and left for school, leaving them balled up on my desk.
It didn?t get any better later. Outside my house there were hundreds of them, tied between houses, around cars, across streets? This had to be some super elaborate prank. One of those hidden camera shows, or a comedy improv blog. They had gotten everyone else to play along too; passer-bys were tangled in them, tying them to objects they were walking towards and away from, as if they had been and were continuing to follow the course laid out for them.
I nervously continued my journey to school. On the bus, every except me was tied to the door. At school, groups of friends were tied to each other; teachers were tied to their desks and boards. Oddly enough, at this point all I could wonder was why I had been left out.
When my friend Lucy sat beside me in first period, she simply plonked her bag down on my lap and rested her chin in her hand, looking right past me to the window outside.
?Hey Lucy.?
No response.
?Come on, I didn?t expect you to be in on this too. ?
She sighed and started taking books from her bag. All the books were tied to her hands. I grinned, and yanked one of the strings off a book. She didn?t seem to notice, instead simply disregarding the book completely, letting it drop to the floor without a moment?s hesitation.
?Um.? I leaned down, picking up her book and placing it back on her desk. She took no notice.
?Well, if that?s how we?re gonna play it.? I smiled, trying to look playful, but really just trying to hide my nervousness. I bundled all the strings attached to her together with one hand, then pulled them all free.
She blinked, turning to stare at me.
?Holy crap, Martin. You?re like a ninja or something.?
?I?ve been sitting here for maybe ten minutes.? I smiled again, relieved my friend had finally ?noticed? me.
?Where did all these strings come from??? She gasped, seemingly noticing for the first time.
?I assumed you were all fucking with me??
She stood up, backing into a corner. No one else in the class noticed.
?They weren?t here just a minute ago! Do you see them too??? Her tone made it clear she was genuinely scared.
?No. Didn?t you-. ? I was interrupted by my teacher slamming the door behind her. Everyone except me and Lucy murmured a good morning, and still, no one seemed to pay either of us any notice.
?People have been ignoring me all day.? I said to Lucy, before turning to our teacher. ?Hey! Dumb *****! You can?t teach for shit!?
No reaction.
?I?m getting away from all this shit.? Lucy pulled a few strings aside and left the class. I followed, and surprise-surprise, no one else noticed.
We wandered the corridors, leaving and entering classes as we saw fit. Whenever we untied a chair or book from someone else, it was like it suddenly didn?t matter to them. It didn?t exist.
I showed her the street outside; there were more strings than when I came in this morning. Twice as many. We carefully picked our way through the tangle, making our way to a nearby coffee shop. Not particularly grand, I know. But what would you do in our situation? As I said, fear of the unknown sometimes seems like the safer option. On a few occasions, I suggested we untie a few more people. Lucy was opposed to it, remembering how terrified she?d been.
In the coffee shop, we grabbed a couple of sandwiches and drinks from the fridge. We found a table, untied all strings attached to the chairs, and sat down. We both ate in silence, both of us too scared, both of us distracting ourselves by watching the strangers in the shop, oblivious to the strings.
After twenty minutes, Lucy spoke up. ?Now she?s gonna take that sandwich.? She said, pointing at a woman across the shop. Sure enough, she walked to the fridge and took the plastic wrapped sandwich she was tied to. ?She pays for it and leaves.? She did so, according to the prophecies of the strings. ?That guy doesn?t intend to pay.? I watched as a man took his coffee and ran out of the store, the two servers just looking too exasperated to go after him.
?This is horrible.? She whimpered. ?Let?s go. Please.?
Outside wasn?t much better. Everyone just followed the strings? instructions, going about their daily lives. Lucy announced she was going home to sleep this off, and I agreed to walk her home. She only lived ten minutes away.
Away from the busier part of town there were fewer strings. It was nicer; we could pretend it wasn?t happening.
When we turned onto Lucy?s street, she stopped, her mouth falling open.
?What now?? I broke the silence, my voice sounding surprisingly small.
?Look.? She pointed outside one of her neighbours houses.
I saw it clearly, and I?ll take my memory of that moment ?til the day I die. A little dark imp, maybe three feet tall, walking along with its knuckles on the ground, almost like a monkey. It had two bulbous yellow eyes taking up about half its face, and no mouth or any other facial features. It was holding a hammer and a ball of twine, which it was letting out behind it.
It walked quickly and quietly from the front door of the house to the mailbox. It stopped, hammered a nail into the side of the box, and tied it?s string around it. It turned to face us, and stopped when it spotted us.
My bottom fell out even further than it had already been, but it just stared with a look of surprise and curiosity. You could almost say it was the more frightened one. Suddenly, it beckoned to us with its tiny hand.
I looked at Lucy, she hadn?t moved. I looked back at the imp, which stared at me.
I halved the distance between us, and then halved it again. This wasn?t fear of the unknown anymore; it was fear of this little guy. Didn?t seem like anything to be scared of. When I was a meter away from it, it extended its hand.
?Uh. Hi.? I shook it. It nodded in approval, blinking its massive yellow eyes up at me.
?So you?re the ones in charge of the strings?? It nodded eagerly. I called Lucy over, but she stayed where she was.
?There are more of you?? Another nod. I wanted to ask it so many questions, about what it was and where it came from, but it seemed for now I was stuck with only yes or no questions.
?Do we even have free will??
It just looked at me, almost sadly. I immediately felt sick to my stomach, and couldn?t bear looking at the little monster anymore. I grabbed Lucy, who had been listening to our exchange, and now sat on the curb with her head in her hands.
?Come on.?
We entered her house, and I made her a cup of tea. When I found her in the living room, she had untied her dog and was curled up with it, crying. I set the tea down and sat beside her.
?I?m so scared.? She whispered after a good ten minutes of sobbing. I didn?t answer. I couldn?t.
?I?m going to sleep? She mumbled suddenly, and was under within the minute. Sleep was starting to sound pretty good all of a sudden, my eyelids suddenly felt like they were being weighed down.
I collapsed to the rug, and the last thing I heard before I fell asleep was the scurrying of several sets of little feet nearby.
I felt much better the next day, as if the whole affair had been a dream. I?d probably have believed that if I hadn?t been awoken by Lucy?s mother that morning, wondering what I was doing sleeping over without permission or something.
Over breakfast, Lucy asked me why I looked so pale and nervous. I turned to her and smiled, mumbling something to her about feeling sick.
But the truth was, I was scared because I couldn?t see any strings, and was wondering whether my actions were truly my own.
There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After a what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning. As he looked around, he was suprised to see the walls adorned by many portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.
Face down in an unfamiliar bed, he turned blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows
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While brushing your teeth in the evening, you catch a glimpse of your wall mirror, covered in fingerprints. Annoyed, you grab a towel and rub at them. They remain. Upon closer inspection, you realize that they seem to be on the other side of the glass..
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The howling outside your window: sometimes it's not the wind. Be even more wary when it grows silent. Don't open the curtains during those times; it will finally see you
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EDIT: Will be editing this as i go, i did have a load on here at once but my browser crashed,. so will have to upload them one at a time ¬¬, will spoiler the big ones but not eh ones that are smallerA teenage baby-sitter put the kids she was watching to sleep in their beds and went back downstairs. The late night news was on the TV -- the reporter said a psychopath from a local mental institution was on the loose and that police thought he might be in the area. He cautioned residents to lock their doors and windows because this guy was very, very dangerous. Well, the teenager checked the locks on the windows and the doors, but she forgot the door on the cellar bulkhead. Needless to say, the psychopath broke in about an hour later, coming up from the cellar, armed with an axe. The children heard some noises downstairs, but thought it was the baby-sitter moving some furniture around. Then it got real quiet. All they heard for the remainder of the night was this noise: "Thump! Thump! Dra-aag... Thump! Thump! Dra-aag..." Evidently, they were too afraid to get up to see what it was. In the morning, their parents came home and were horrified to find the babysitter at the top of the stairs, dead with both arms hacked off at the elbows. She'd been climbing the stairs on the bloody stumps of her arms, pulling her badly injured body along. Was she trying to check on the children? Was she trying to get help? Or in the madness of her tortured soul, was she planning to kill the children herself?
Basically, whilst you are reading it, a scary face jumps out at you.LastMondaysHangover said:I'm too chicken-shit to find out, what is it?U71L7Y_F0RMUL4 said:Well done, that did give me quite a shock. I even swore a bit at that one.S.R.S. said:Go to ED and search creepy pasta.
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ahhhh bugger >.<David_G said:Nice, dude. But I'd recommend reading through this thread before posting stories, because I've already seen the third and the last one here.
I was suspicious that it was a pop-up when I couldn't see anything after 10 seconds, so I viewed the imaged to see if it was a gif and was relieved when I saw it was a jpeg.Stormz said:When you see it...
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look for a very tall faceless in those.You don't see him if your not looking for him but when when you do see him you will always see it.gof22 said:What am I exactly supposed to be afraid of in the two videos? Entry #1 seems like some guy just went around the room with a camcorder and recorded random stuff. Entry #6 looks like a dinosaur with Christmas lights wrapped around it went past the window. I suppose seeing a dinosaur would be scary.RamirezDoEverything said:I watched the whole series before and had a sleepless night or 2-Drifter- said:How about some Marble Hornets?
Ah, I love this series.
I see what you mean now. I was just waiting for the monster or whatever it was to jump out at the camera. I looked back at the videos and saw what you were talking about with seeing a guy outside the house. Honestly, I don't find it that scary. The Slenderman just looked like some tall guy in a suit.Giantcain said:look for a very tall faceless in those.You don't see him if your not looking for him but when when you do see him you will always see it.gof22 said:What am I exactly supposed to be afraid of in the two videos? Entry #1 seems like some guy just went around the room with a camcorder and recorded random stuff. Entry #6 looks like a dinosaur with Christmas lights wrapped around it went past the window. I suppose seeing a dinosaur would be scary.RamirezDoEverything said:I watched the whole series before and had a sleepless night or 2-Drifter- said:How about some Marble Hornets?
Ah, I love this series.
SWEET MOTHER OF CHRIST!! You bastard. I was genuinely terrified. Seriously, this is the first time in memory that I have been frightened by something so much that I made noise involuntarily. It sounded something like "nnnnnyyyyUUUUUUUHHHHHnnn!!!!!!" I hope no one heard it.S.R.S. said:Go to ED and search creepy pasta.
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That Garry's Mod video looked like something out of Silent Hill. When I seen that dead body at the top of the stairs I thought it was one of those nurses from the Silent Hill games.TheYellowCellPhone said:That is genius - if Douglas Adams were alive today, he'd either write that or highly respect it.reg42 said:Ok well I posted these in the "part 2" thread because I didn't realise this one was still going, so...
A baby girl is mysteriously dropped off at an orphanage in Cleveland in 1945. "Jane" grows up
lonely and dejected, not knowing who her parents are, until one day in 1963 she is strangely
attracted to a drifter. She falls in love with him, but just when things are looking up for
Jane a series of disasters strikes: First, she becomes pregnant by the drifter, who then
disappears. Second, during the complicated delivery doctors discover that Jane has both sets
of sex organs, and to save her life, they most surgically convert "her" to a "him." Finally,
a mysterious stranger kidnaps her baby from the delivery room.
Reeling from these disasters, rejected from society, scorned by fate, "he" becomes a drunkard
and a drifter. Not only has Jane lost her parents and her lover, but he has lost his only
child as well. Years later, in 1970, he stumbles into a lonely bar, called Pop's Place, and
spills out his pathetic story to an elderly bartender. The sympathetic bartender offers the
drifter the chance to avenge the stranger who left her pregnant and abandoned, on the
condition that he join the "time traveller corps." Both of them enter a time machine and the
bartender drops the drifter off in 1963. The drifter is strangely attracted to a young orphan
girl, who subsequently becomes pregnant.
The bartender then goes forward 9 months, kidnaps the baby girl from the hospital, and drops
the baby off in an orphanage back in 1945. Then the bartender drops off the thoroughly
confused drifter in 1985, to enlist in the time traveller corps. The drifter eventually gets
his life together and becomes respected and elderly member of the time traveller corps, and
then disguises himself as a bartender and has his most difficult mission: a date with
destiny, meeting a certain drifter at Pop's Place in 1970.
For contribution, funny, sort of unsettling GMOD video: