You're right. Antagonizing you was both unprofessional childish, and I apologize for it. I'm sorry that I've written articles that you haven't found up to snuff, but I will do my best to keep honing my skills. If you find errors in my articles, please point them out, and I will endeavor to correct them.Monoochrom said:As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.
"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."
So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.
In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
Not to sound like an ass, but if you wanna be the better guy, why just not drop it? it's clear you disagree strongly with the way things are run around here. So why be here and why add fuel to this fire? It's really not making a difference; those who want to apply will apply (Like me) and those who share your point of view already left. Just check the past posts.Monoochrom said:As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.Marshall Honorof said:By all means, throw your hat in the ring and tell us how to do our jobs better. My tip would be to put a space between "at" and "least." You may also consider a comma after "obviously." Good luck!Monoochrom said:In short, you could all do better. Obviously you aren't interested in that, so atleast don't give yourselves too much credit.
Oh, and please continue to tell us what we think, and what we are interested in. That's charming.
"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."
So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.
In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
Not to butt in, but... well, yeah, actually, butting in here:Monoochrom said:So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.
Your initial comment wasn't criticism, it was just snark. There's a common fallacy that "professionalism" means turning the other cheek to insults and unjust criticism. My job is to inform and occasionally entertain you, not act as your personal punching bag.Monoochrom said:As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.Marshall Honorof said:By all means, throw your hat in the ring and tell us how to do our jobs better. My tip would be to put a space between "at" and "least." You may also consider a comma after "obviously." Good luck!Monoochrom said:In short, you could all do better. Obviously you aren't interested in that, so atleast don't give yourselves too much credit.
Oh, and please continue to tell us what we think, and what we are interested in. That's charming.
"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."
So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.
In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
YOU!Grey Carter said:I agree completely. He forgot to add "handsome" and "charismatic." Way to let the side down, Mike.Monoochrom said:I'm sorry but that is not how I would describe the abilities of the news writers here....an extremely talented, insightful writer...
Lol. That was pretty funny and also fairly accurate.Racecarlock said:You forgot rule 4. All titles must be sensationalist bullshit.
I'd ask that you not confuse me with Grey, or any news writer, or Escapist staff. Now, if you're meaning that to indicate that I'm somehow "acting like a dick," I really have to question your judgement on the matter. I'd prefer instead to move on from that, and boil your post down to its constituent elements, as perceived from out here:Monoochrom said:Please consider that it tends to echo when you scream in a cave. Act like a dick to me and I'm not going to be nice to you. The difference is that I don't have anything to lose in doing so. Be nice, calm and collected and I will also calmly explain what I think can be done better.
Hi Monoocrom,Monoochrom said:After writing up a long drawn out post explaining why I disagree or why you are just plain wrong in some cases, I reflected on it and came to the conclussion that we aren't getting anywhere with that. So you know what? Here's the criticism, let's see what happens.Dastardly said:snip
1. I disagree with you proclaiming yourselves talented and insightful writers. I disagree with this for multiple reasons.
- The same article then goes on to explain that applications are to re-write a made up article from another gaming site. This implies that all or atleast the majority of News for the escapist is written in this fashion. I simply do not consider this something talented and insightful writers should do while refering to themselves as such.
- I do not like how you pat yourselfs on the back, it implies that you are already great, yet the entire Mass Effect Debacle in which nearly every writer here commented without having understood the full picture (evident from WHAT they were writing) speaks a different language. This is not what a insightful writer does.
Nobody is saying you should be self-deprecating, but if you get ahead of yourselves like that, I have no reason to believe that the escapist considers much of anything about their own work improveable.
1-2 I do not consider the news here proof of said talent or insightfulness. More the contrary actually.
- News should not contain the opinion of the writer. News is not a opinion piece, so as a matter of form it shouldn't, but beyond that the writers opinion can distort the given information. Using the Bleszinski News from yesterday, wouldn't any of you agree that it's less likely for the Reader to consider Bleszinskis opinion valid seeing as how the writer is making fun of him in the article? It fails at being a proper, neutral, news article.
- Sensationilist Titles, this is pretty much the case with any news article about something scientific.
Just a little criticism in regard to this specific Thread. This is not all I would criticize on the whole.