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Marshall Honorof

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Monoochrom said:
As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.

"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."

So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.

In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
You're right. Antagonizing you was both unprofessional childish, and I apologize for it. I'm sorry that I've written articles that you haven't found up to snuff, but I will do my best to keep honing my skills. If you find errors in my articles, please point them out, and I will endeavor to correct them.
 

PatrickXD

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Maybe next year guys?
17 years of age as it stands, and I have a silly amount of A2 exams to do soon.
Good luck to everyone who enters though!
 

Dastardly

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Wish I had the time to devote to something like this! I feel like I could complete the introductory task, but I couldn't be sure about consistently delivering afterward given my schedule.

I hope the search finds you some good folks!
 

Beautiful End

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Monoochrom said:
Marshall Honorof said:
Monoochrom said:
In short, you could all do better. Obviously you aren't interested in that, so atleast don't give yourselves too much credit.
By all means, throw your hat in the ring and tell us how to do our jobs better. My tip would be to put a space between "at" and "least." You may also consider a comma after "obviously." Good luck!

Oh, and please continue to tell us what we think, and what we are interested in. That's charming.
As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.

"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."

So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.

In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
Not to sound like an ass, but if you wanna be the better guy, why just not drop it? it's clear you disagree strongly with the way things are run around here. So why be here and why add fuel to this fire? It's really not making a difference; those who want to apply will apply (Like me) and those who share your point of view already left. Just check the past posts.

I don't know. That's just what I do when I see someone posting something I disagree with. I either wiggle my finger and move on because I couldn't care less or...I just ignore it. Because I couldn't care less. But I just don't see what you're expecting out of this. An apology? A change-of-ways from them? A removal of this thread? A pat on the shoulder? Or you're just sharing your opinion? Because if that's it, you made your point a couple of posts back. I really don't know.
 

dragonswarrior

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Huh. I think I will give this a shot. Worse that can happen is that I don't hear anything I guess... *laughs*
 

Dastardly

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Monoochrom said:
So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.
Not to butt in, but... well, yeah, actually, butting in here:

Seems to me you're not interested in providing "feedback" to either of these guys -- at least not in any useful way. What you've provided is an insult (or at best a "complaint"). Yet then you feign surprise when they don't immediately rush to find out the justification behind your feelings?

You didn't present what they can do better, or even any specific grievance you have with how they do things now. You just said what basically amounts to, "You're not very good," and then make a pretty ballsy assumption about the inner financial workings of the publication itself.

You know what that sounds like from the outside? NOT the start of a "conversation," that's for sure. It sounds like someone who already thinks they know it all, and they're gonna tell you how it is... and that isn't much fun. That's, you know, the kind of person that doesn't really pay much attention to feedback...?

If I had some tips on how you could optimize your living room furniture arrangement, I could say, "Hey, here are some tips I have to blah blah blah." Uninvited? Sure. A little rude? Eh, "presuming" might be a better word. But it could start a conversation that leads to a productive conclusion.

Now, if I stomp into your living room uninvited and throw one of your chairs across the room and say, "This place sucks," how likely do you think we are to have a conversation? No matter how good my advice would have been, you're going to deal with my prickishness first -- because that's what I led with. I did not begin from a place of helpfulness, or with any manners whatsoever.

Just some, y'know, "feedback." Please consider.
 

The Wooster

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Monoochrom said:
Marshall Honorof said:
Monoochrom said:
In short, you could all do better. Obviously you aren't interested in that, so atleast don't give yourselves too much credit.
By all means, throw your hat in the ring and tell us how to do our jobs better. My tip would be to put a space between "at" and "least." You may also consider a comma after "obviously." Good luck!

Oh, and please continue to tell us what we think, and what we are interested in. That's charming.
As smart as you seem to think you are, you and Grey have done nothing but prove my point.

"What? Someone is critisizing us? Better leave a snarky comment because that is the pinnacle of professionalism."

So, yes, obviously you aren't interested in Feedback if that is how you react to it. Neither of you came to the conclussion to ask WHY I wouldn't describe any of you as insightful or talented writers. Go ahead and point out what errors I might have in my Forum post (because I really have alot of reason to pay attention to that, huh?), I'm not asking for money for it or that anyone consider it professional level writing.

In other words, thank you for not only proving my point, but also for making a fool of yourself in the process.
Your initial comment wasn't criticism, it was just snark. There's a common fallacy that "professionalism" means turning the other cheek to insults and unjust criticism. My job is to inform and occasionally entertain you, not act as your personal punching bag.
 

alrekr

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Oh gosh darn why did I have to land an editor position on a small time site before hearing about this. Would it a breach of loyalty to apply anyhow?
 

PrototypeC

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Grey Carter said:
Monoochrom said:
...an extremely talented, insightful writer...
I'm sorry but that is not how I would describe the abilities of the news writers here.
I agree completely. He forgot to add "handsome" and "charismatic." Way to let the side down, Mike.
YOU!

That's right, now I remember why I wanted more people on the news team. Unbiased, un-self-satisfied news-bringing. More people capable of bringing the facts and stories that interest the Escapist community as a WHOLE, in as much of an unbiased fashion as possible.

I'll consider it, but while I have the time, I don't think I have the skill. I guess I hold creating public opinion to be more sacred than others do...
I can think of a few people I know who might be interested in this. I'll send them the information and hopefully, whoever we get, they'll be what
we've all been hoping for.
 

kitsuta

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Wow, I had no idea there was so much (that is, any) hostility towards content collation in general and Escapist news writers in particular. It's like going to Cracked.com and reading comments complaining that there are too many snarky list articles.

Anyway, it was super fun to rewrite this story; I love its sheer preposterousness. The cringe-worthy detail about social media pokemon was a particularly nice touch. Good luck to all the hopeful news writers, and particularly to the people (I HOPE it's not just Susan) who have to read the deluge of submissions next week!

EDIT: And about five minutes after sending the email, I've realized I forgot to include a link to the source. Curse my absent-mindedness!
 

Dastardly

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Monoochrom said:
Please consider that it tends to echo when you scream in a cave. Act like a dick to me and I'm not going to be nice to you. The difference is that I don't have anything to lose in doing so. Be nice, calm and collected and I will also calmly explain what I think can be done better.
I'd ask that you not confuse me with Grey, or any news writer, or Escapist staff. Now, if you're meaning that to indicate that I'm somehow "acting like a dick," I really have to question your judgement on the matter. I'd prefer instead to move on from that, and boil your post down to its constituent elements, as perceived from out here:

1. You seem to believe that being "the customer" shields you from any expectation of decorum. There's a reason such things are called common courtesy in many circles. I realize that, to someone with your outlook, appealing to manners really isn't going to do much, but here I go anyway: Being "the customer" doesn't entitle you to treat "the employees" like crap without any reprisal. They're people, and people tend not to like being insulted. But...

2. You seem to believe that what you said wasn't insulting. I could understand that perhaps you don't intend it that way, but by the phrasing you've used, it can only be properly understood in that way. If I call you a moron, but then insist that it's "accurate," would you accept that as not being an insult? The issue, again, is your phrasing. You weren't directing your comments at their work. You were directing your comments at them. It's a fine line in some cases, but critically important for clear communication.

3. It seems you don't feel criticism should be constructive. If criticism isn't in some way constructive, it's just bitching. If you're not going to specifically mention what you had a problem with, and recommend some type of solution, it's just plain ol' bitching. And while, yes, you can technically still label it "criticism," it's not useful in any way.

4. You seem to believe it's the best idea to open a dialog by firing a shot across the bow. If you really wanted anything to change, you'd want to ensure a successful conversation. Starting it out with that tone (and then claiming you'll only dial it back if the other side shows themselves willing to put up with that shit) doesn't accomplish that anywhere on the planet. Your approach is commonly referred to as "picking a fight."

If you're interested in seeing change, I think you could make it happen. Start a conversation about what you feel is going wrong. Express yourself clearly. And I bet that you wouldn't be willing to just roll over and give up the first time someone disagreed with you (evidenced here), so don't expect that of them, either. As long as you stick to attacking the problem and not the person, they'll be less apt to go on the defense.

Conversations can either be about solutions, or they can be about who's right and who's wrong. They can't be both, sorry.

(Also, you didn't really even give anyone the opportunity to "be a dick to you" before you evidently decided you weren't going to "be nice to them." That doesn't provide much incentive to trust your intentions, you know.)
 

Yureina

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Hmm... I'll have to think this one over. This could be the lucky break that I have been hoping for. But only time will tell if that is the case. :eek:
 

Mike Kayatta

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Monoochrom said:
Dastardly said:
After writing up a long drawn out post explaining why I disagree or why you are just plain wrong in some cases, I reflected on it and came to the conclussion that we aren't getting anywhere with that. So you know what? Here's the criticism, let's see what happens.

1. I disagree with you proclaiming yourselves talented and insightful writers. I disagree with this for multiple reasons.

- The same article then goes on to explain that applications are to re-write a made up article from another gaming site. This implies that all or atleast the majority of News for the escapist is written in this fashion. I simply do not consider this something talented and insightful writers should do while refering to themselves as such.

- I do not like how you pat yourselfs on the back, it implies that you are already great, yet the entire Mass Effect Debacle in which nearly every writer here commented without having understood the full picture (evident from WHAT they were writing) speaks a different language. This is not what a insightful writer does.

Nobody is saying you should be self-deprecating, but if you get ahead of yourselves like that, I have no reason to believe that the escapist considers much of anything about their own work improveable.

1-2 I do not consider the news here proof of said talent or insightfulness. More the contrary actually.

- News should not contain the opinion of the writer. News is not a opinion piece, so as a matter of form it shouldn't, but beyond that the writers opinion can distort the given information. Using the Bleszinski News from yesterday, wouldn't any of you agree that it's less likely for the Reader to consider Bleszinskis opinion valid seeing as how the writer is making fun of him in the article? It fails at being a proper, neutral, news article.

- Sensationilist Titles, this is pretty much the case with any news article about something scientific.

Just a little criticism in regard to this specific Thread. This is not all I would criticize on the whole.
Hi Monoocrom,

After your many posts in this thread, I think I finally understand your confusion. If you'd please reread my initial post, I asked that only talented, exceptional, and insightful writers apply to become newsies here. In fact, the only time I did describe the current news team, was with the adjectives "quirky" and "international". I'm sure you'd agree that any company looking to hire talent would call for the best to come forward. My post is no different.

This response is not meant to imply that I don't feel as though our writers are exceptional (because personally, I absolutely do), but that was not the content of the posting, as you have stated. I sincerely hope that clears all of this up. Thanks!
 

CarlsonAndPeeters

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Just sent my entry in. Not a lot of confidence, but one can always hope.

EDIT: Just noticed that they will only be responding to people who are being offered jobs. Not to tell the Escapist how to do their jobs, but that seems a little...rude. Like a polite form rejection email would be appreciated.