You might wanna check the last panel again. There's clearly someone at the pond though I'm not sure if it's a hobo with aZachary Amaranth said:
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imo, this arc isn't that bad, but it's (as people stated) not really suited for the webcomic platform, and you really launched it at a bad time. I don't think people would really mind if you launched it at NOT E3, but since you did, people were kinda hoping for some E3 jokes.
It doesn't help that, yeah, this is starting to drag a bit. tbh, I wouldn't mind one big page that sets up an entire scene of this followed by three small little shorts while you make the next big scene. Sure, continuity might take it in the ass, but it would make a more structured and fluid result, and it would cause the Escapist to stop deploying their pitchforks.
imo, this arc isn't that bad, but it's (as people stated) not really suited for the webcomic platform, and you really launched it at a bad time. I don't think people would really mind if you launched it at NOT E3, but since you did, people were kinda hoping for some E3 jokes.
It doesn't help that, yeah, this is starting to drag a bit. tbh, I wouldn't mind one big page that sets up an entire scene of this followed by three small little shorts while you make the next big scene. Sure, continuity might take it in the ass, but it would make a more structured and fluid result, and it would cause the Escapist to stop deploying their pitchforks.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3kTnBTkUAnE
is there a wysiwyg editor for posts rather than just dumb textfield?
is there a wysiwyg editor for posts rather than just dumb textfield?
Hobos in parks are notoriously likely to turn to the police as trustworthy and reliable sources for information. Said hobo probably called up the cops on his cell phone and....Sewa_Yunga said:
Seriously, though, the presence of what is likely a hobo doesn't really hurt the point I'm trying to make. There clearly aren't a lot of people around. Said hobo appears to have noticed, though, or he's lying on the ground (can't tell from the distorted perspective), but still, you probably won't get a lot of onlookers here.
Because it's a free piece of entertainment that takes all of about two minutes to read, which nobody is forcing you to look at? Christ, people are needlessly caustic on this website.rhodo said:
Keep up the great work, guys. I'm interested in seeing how this arc ends.
Sparrow said:
My God, my eyes have been opened. Grey is becoming a sappy, cheesy Rom-dram writer! I can't believe I hadn't noticed it before with such cheesy articles as "Kickstarter Video Project Attracts Misogynist Horde" [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/news/view/117848-Kickstarter-Video-Project-Attracts-Misogynist-Horde] and "Author Researching 'The Kindness of America' Shot By Stranger" [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/news/view/117881-Author-Researching-The-Kindness-of-America-Shot-By-Stranger].
Thank you for making me realize that this isn't a satirical, sarcastic webcomic based around a person who is, at the very least, mildly sociopathic and now seeing fictional characters because of a head injury, and is instead a webcomic about the love life of a quirky person who occasionally has conversations with her imaginary friends.
Thank you for making me realize that this isn't a satirical, sarcastic webcomic based around a person who is, at the very least, mildly sociopathic and now seeing fictional characters because of a head injury, and is instead a webcomic about the love life of a quirky person who occasionally has conversations with her imaginary friends.
Turning the sarcasm off now, I'm not being quick about giving out compliments. I'm genuinely interested in seeing how this turns out, because it's a piece of entertainment that I'm getting to view free of charge, and I have to go out of my way to view it. I also think that Cory does great work on drawing this webcomic, and Grey Carter is a very good writer, so why would I not compliment their talents?
I never read too much of it, but the video game thing was kinda funny at least. Now its like some weird romance about self-worth and destroying relationships....but everyone is a fucking psychopath.ace_of_something said:
Its.....strange to say the least.
Well, mostly because the plot is pretty predictable so far. It's also been going on for a damn while and hasn't really reached anywhere. Erin wasn't exactly the most three dimensional character to begin with, so shaping an entire arc around her becoming human (or whatever this is leading up, I think it'd be far more interesting if he dropped her to be honest...) doesn't allow for stellar writing.shrekfan246 said:
It's ok. It's certainly not bad. Cory's art makes up for it most of the time, and every now and again this arc is humourous, but the general consensus is that it worked a lot better when it was more focused on video games and being funny - which I agree with it.
[sup]Also, there was no reason to snap at me. I wasn't saying you were wrong, just warning against the perils of overly-praising.[/sup]
[sup]I apologize, I'm just tired of how often people on this website act like they're detached and emotionally stunted, unable to enjoy anything that doesn't tickle them in a specific, particular way.[/sup]Sparrow said:
I think this arc is only suffering from the format of having two pages released per week. It's being drawn out for a very long time, and as such the staggering release is tiring people out because they want it to be resolved so that new things can be brought in again. I can agree with some of the complaints.
Wheres the funny? I'm not gonna pretend I'm not a douche and just come out and say this new serious direction this is taking is not good for the comic.
I read this because it's funny If I wanted drama I'd watch prime ministers questions on the news.
I read this because it's funny If I wanted drama I'd watch prime ministers questions on the news.
How is that helping? Also, that guys has the reflexes of a cat& some wicked upper body strength
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