Critical Miss: #5

Inco

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Trivun said:
ULTRAJOE!!!!!

Also, great comic again, love the set-up there :D
Thats the first thing i thought of typing when clicking the comments section.

Also, It setup and took the shot cunningly.
 

Tirnor

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Susan Arendt said:
Eventually, yes. One will likely have a hamster on it.
This, and this alone, will keep me at least opening the page with the comic on it.
 

Formica Archonis

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Yet another random question. When did the "fix" happen? I never saw the original online and I thought I hit it pretty soon after it was uploaded.
 

Blair Bennett

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Grey Carter said:
Blair Bennett said:
especially with the vicious beating of elderly people who disagree with me.
Which, and let's be frank here, is one of the founding freedoms of the internet.
It's part of why so many people spend time here.
 

Bevvie

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Formica Archonis said:
Yet another random question. When did the "fix" happen? I never saw the original online and I thought I hit it pretty soon after it was uploaded.
As in the 'fixed' part of the comic title?
 

Samurai Goomba

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ArmorArmadillo said:
Wow, this series is really developing a pattern for atrocious comic style. This joke, like most in the comic, is absoltely terrible for it's telegraphing.

Let's break down the panels.

1: Girl talks about wanting to use violence after seeing Kickass.
2: Sees Ebert and says she's going to change his mind.
3: As superhero, threatens violence.
4: Uses violence.

Sets up a situation, then follows through the situation. No twist, no variation, just doing exactly what you say you're going to do. This comic always leaves a bad taste in that it always tells you what it's punchline is going to be in advance. A character warns that an avalanche of games is coming, then an avalanche of games comes.

Comics as a medium demand a certain understanding of timing style, and organizing panels for an effective punchline, and this comic consistently fails miserably at that.

Edit: But oh, there's an Ultrajoe plug OMG. Really? References? That's supposed to carry the comic? People looking at it and going "Oo! I recognize that thing you just mentioned!"
This is actually a good point about how you can see the punchlines coming. That said, a lot of other comics are still funny despite this problem. In fact, MOST comics have telegraphed jokes from time to time. Since Critical Miss doesn't have a large backlog of comics built up, at this point it's not possible to properly analyze the comic simply because we don't have enough evidence of the cartoonist's style. Five comics are not enough to establish a trend, anymore than five doodles on a napkin are enough to get the measure of someone's artistic talent.

I've seen maybe three or four comics that consistently surprised me in terms of punchlines. Those being: The Perry Bible Fellowship, Cyanide and Happiness, Saturday Morning Breakfast Cereal and, I dunno, Dilbert or something. Other excellent comics like Foxtrot and Pearls Before Swine, while good, tend to reveal their jokes in advance. But they are still good. That's my point. It's like how you can hear a great comedian tell a joke and you might have heard it before and know how it goes, but because of the WAY he tells it, it's funny anyway.

Point is, don't pass judgement too soon on a series that's only had 5 strips so far. No syndicated cartoonist will ever tell you his or her first five strips were the best he or she ever did. Because they weren't.

Did I mention I've considered cartooning as a career?
 

ben---neb

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There are few problems that cannot be solved through the correct application of force.
 

Rusman

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Sly little 40K reference there, that's what I like to see.

Kinda wish people would leave off the whole Ebert thing now, the man's entitled to his own opinion. That doesn't mean it has to be the right opinion. Also he makes a fantastic troll... And you know the last thing you want to do with troll is feed it.
 

Formica Archonis

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Bevvie said:
Formica Archonis said:
Yet another random question. When did the "fix" happen? I never saw the original online and I thought I hit it pretty soon after it was uploaded.
As in the 'fixed' part of the comic title?
Yup, and the various edits to the comic.
 

steeple

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i guess a shoe in the ass is as much art as today's "modern art"...

this comic does a nice job in making me chuckle...
 

InvisibleMilk

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Ultra Joe! I miss that dude. That was a great delivery on the convincement. Kick Ass has been teaching people alotta things. Especially gore and children are win.