Azahul said:
With all the rival factions of ASOIAF playing like a comedy of dunces, it seems that the longer it goes on the more the series turns into a generic fantasy story of a dragon-riding Chosen One returning to her Lost Throne to save the Kingdom from the Forces of Darkness (TM). Comparing the two series is probably an unfair comparison. They started in similar places but ended up going in different directions, I guess.
ASOIAF was always a marriage of traditional high fantasy elements and historical realism, which was cribbed heavily from real world events. Where you see "dunces", I see people acting with human motivations and displaying human frailties, whereas a more typical fantasy narrative would feature fail-proof heroes demonstrating superior judgment and borderline precognitive foresight time and time again. Your "Dragon Riding Chosen One" would indeed have been an unfortunate direction for the series to hew in, and the fact it hasn't has been one of the primary bitches about the series...most particularly the last book. All I ever hear is the same monotonous spiel about "too many boring politics" and "when is Dany coming west with her dragons". Daenerys is busy being mired neck deep in regional intrigues and the imminent collapse of her ill conceived revolution to come west. And her dragons have gone utterly feral. Oh right, and she might be going insane.
ASOIAF is many things, not all of them good, but "generic fantasy" is not one of them. Indeed, the story gained popular and critical traction precisely because it was an aggressive subversion of what was, at the time, an incredibly incestuous and repetitive genre. A lot of the best post millennial fantasy writers, like Abercrombie, Rothfuss and Lynch, were heavily influenced by Martin's work, which is widely regarded as a seminal classic. Criticize it if you must, but criticize it
fairly.
keosegg said:
I know stuff happened in AFFC, but the problem is, Martin is so obsessed with minutiae that when the "stuff" finally comes, it's taken us nearly 700 pages to get there.
I *like* the amount of detail and context he folds into his world. I consider it the primary merit of the series. It's like criticizing The Wire for striving to be too realistic, or criticizing Arrested Development for being too cynical. I don't think Martin's obsession with minutiae is the problem, I think a lack of editorial oversight is the problem. As I said previously, he's been allowed free reign to indulge in authorial excess, and it's hurt not only the pacing of the later books but also the pacing of their release. I think two weighty travelogues with a dozen new POV characters would've been easier to swallow had they not taken over a decade to arrive in our laps.
keosegg said:
I mean, whenever Margeary does something that looks like it'll make Cersei lose it, but no, she fumes mentally and does nothing. It seems as if Martin was trying to show Cersei being cautious for a change, but sitting on her arse all day and fuming to herself is not the way to do it. There is no drama.
Eh. I hated Cersei's POV chapters on a first read. On subsequent reads I have found them some of the most entertaining chapters in the entire series. Certainly some of the most effortlessly comical. To each their own I suppose.
keosegg said:
And the Dornish folk, so many one off characters, all relatives of The Red Viper. They all want to go to war, but Oberyn says no. For most of their allotted time, it looks as if he's nothing but a giant wimp, but then near the end, it's revealed that he had a master plan all along, and it involves Dany, somehow, I don't know, it wasn't clear.
I'm assuming you mean Doran. Yes, due to a lack of emotional investment in the characters, the chapters with Dorne and the Ironborn are some of the weakest in the series. I've warmed to Dorne on subsequent reads, but the Ironborn chapters still leave me wanting more. Both would have been greatly enhanced had George found a way to maneuver a more well loved POV character into place to see the action. That's why, IMO, the Winterfell/Wall chapters in ADWD work so well, despite having the action focused almost entirely around non POV characters Stannis, Ramsay, and Roose. You're invested in Jon, and you're invested in Theon despite yourself.
keosegg said:
AFFC was nothing but tedium.
Disagreed.
keosegg said:
Martin mentioned something about The Meereenese Knot of his story and how difficult it was to untangle it, drawing parallels to the Gordian Knot from the legends of Alexander the Great. Of course what Alexander did to that knot was cut it in half with his sword. That's what Martin should have done with AFFC, taken his authorial sword and cut the plot knot in half.
The fabled "Meereenese Knot" was his attempt to detail what had previously been planned as a "five year gap" where everyone would age and certain pieces would be shuffled around behind a curtain. Martin took some previous criticism about a lack of attention to detail (a horse was the wrong sex, someone had the wrong color of eyes) to heart, and seemed slavishly devoted to making sure everything made logistical sense and timelines overlapped properly. It really was a nightmarish task, and in retrospect perhaps he would've been better off just abandoning the plan and sticking with the original 5 year gap. I find it hard to blame the guy for not offloading years of work when it became apparent he'd bitten off a lot to chew, though. What I DO blame him for is allowing his attentions to be pulled in 100 directions instead of finishing the epic that has become his most notable work.
keosegg said:
I should probably mention that this is all my opinion, informed by my own biases and not gospel truth. You can disagree with me and state why and I'll gladly receive it and respond, but it's doubtful you'll change my mind.
I think I've met maybe two people in my almost 40 years of life who have been willing to have their minds changed in debate. Alas, most of us just like the sound of our opinions, and we find ourselves utterly convincing. I'll say it again...I'm not above criticizing ASOIAF. I'm CERTAINLY not above criticizing GOT, which drives me to distraction sometimes. I just think the criticisms should be
fair, and
thoughtful. I am not always of a mind with critical consensus either, but when I find myself at odds with large scale public and/or critical acclaim I usually assume the fault is with my tastes, and not the work itself. That's not making an appeal to popularity either, just accepting the fallibility of my own idiosyncrasies. For example, I despise almost all of the films of Stanley Kubrick, yet he is widely regarded as a visionary auteur. Rather than assume I am the benchmark of good taste and sneer at his proponents, I fully admit I'm clearly too daft or unsophisticated to appreciate the man's work. Something about him just rubs me the wrong way. Likewise J.R.R. Tolkien, whose volumes I found to be the very soul of tedium, packed with laborious and dull descriptions of every meal and roadside plant, and nigh endless pages of hobbits and elves bursting into spontaneous verse. I always hurl the volume across the room in disgust before I can even get to Rivendell. Yet what is more likely? That the most influential and acclaimed fantasy series of all time is rubbish? Or that I'm just an impatient clod? Alas, I think most likely the latter.