The stock seems rather small, but maybe thats just me, and what's up with the trigger guard? i'm guessing it's been broken after years of wear and tear?
Here's my go at a post-apocalyptic gun. Semi-auto carbine thingy, comments and criticisms?
Check and check. The stock is a bit small, but I think it's enough. I replaced the trigger guard with something that looked more scrapped together. I suppose I should also add that I was going for an elephant gun, but it didn't turn out too well either way.
Holy hell, that thing looks brutal. Very nice wear n' tear effects; the individual parts look like they survived quite a few apocalypses. Very nice design, very awesome. This is what anyone building and P-A weapon should aim for. I really don't have criticism other than the foregrip. The placement is just weird.
Ah fair enough then. I like yours, it certainly looks like it could do some damage, battle worn or not
And as far as my design goes I can see where you're coming from with the foregrip, its too high and too far forward. I probably should have saved the code so i could change it
I think the nicks are a little overdone; you'd file anything like that down so you didn't end up injuring yourself just by picking the thing up. Also, there's wear on it everywhere but the muzzle, which I'd think would be more likely to be scuffed than the rest of the gun.
I think the nicks are a little overdone; you'd file anything like that down so you didn't end up injuring yourself just by picking the thing up. Also, there's wear on it everywhere but the muzzle, which I'd think would be more likely to be scuffed than the rest of the gun.
I think the nicks are a little overdone; you'd file anything like that down so you didn't end up injuring yourself just by picking the thing up. Also, there's wear on it everywhere but the muzzle, which I'd think would be more likely to be scuffed than the rest of the gun.
We'll all have to remember these points for next time, but alas, no export code for the rifle. I will gather my bearings and try again sometime in the near future. I assume it will turn out better than last time :/
The stock seems rather small, but maybe thats just me, and what's up with the trigger guard? i'm guessing it's been broken after years of wear and tear?
Here's my go at a post-apocalyptic gun. Semi-auto carbine thingy, comments and criticisms?
Pistol I made last night but couldn't be arsed to post.
I rather like it when there's a trend; it means I can nick shittake inspiration from everyone and create stuff that I otherwise wouldn't have thought of.
I know this wasn't done on Pimp My Gun, but it does fit the thread. I got bored a couple of hours ago and drew this revolver, semi-inspired by the revolver craze of 81 and 82. Feel free to tear it down, as I drew it from memory and my memory isn't very good. Point out what I've done wrong so I can perfect it. I'm planning on doing a bunch more.
Pistol I made last night but couldn't be arsed to post.
I rather like it when there's a trend; it means I can nick shittake inspiration from everyone and create stuff that I otherwise wouldn't have thought of.
Alright so the G36 magwell is getting some love I dig
I'm split between calling thing a machine pistol and an SMG, but I have decided that it is cool. W&T effects are up to code and I like the pistol grip there.
For a drawing, that is pretty amazing. I can't draw worth shit so I can't offer comment on the artwork, but I would like to point out that your rear sight is kinda weird and that your curvy hammer is slightly bizarre. I do look forward to the next sketches, though.
Props for using the 50 cal, but there are two problems with using a piece that your gun isn't meant for; the magazine is a wonky shape and your ejection port is too small. The 50 cal is cool, but make sure you can use it.
a small project i started.. please tell me what i should improve..
WW2 rifle thingy.. {NOTE: its not BASED on anything, but i have taken my inspiration from the Mosin Nagant)
* You've drawn the cylinder as if it's being viewed down the length of the gun, but the rest of the gun is shown side-on.
* Revolver cylinders tend to have a small gap between them and the frame rather than having it extend right up to them.
* Barrel is too large for the cylinder.
* That thing under the barrel is a recess the extractor rod sits in; it needs to be dead level with the middle of the cylinder.
* Picture the hammer as a PMG part: you need to flip it top to bottom and left to right (or, hell, just look at the hammer on the Eryx down there, if you prefer). Remember, you're supposed to be able to use your thumb to pull it back, and at the moment that'd be a good way to stab yourself.
* The frame seems a little too deep below the cylinder; all that really needs to fit there is the pivot at the bottom of the crane.
* Grip is awkward; the finger grips should be curving inwards, not outwards, and the shape seems weird for actually holding it. Also, since you've defined it with a much fainter line than the rest of the outline, it doesn't actually look like it's part of the gun at all.
* At the size you've drawn it, the trigger guard should be thicker than just a single line, and flare out into the frame at both ends rather than just kinda being there.
* You should probably consider shading the barrel and cylinder at the top and bottom so they don't look quite as flat.
Also, if we're allowed drawings, hey:
Both drawn in biro without the aid of a ruler, but hey.
Props for using the 50 cal, but there are two problems with using a piece that your gun isn't meant for; the magazine is a wonky shape and your ejection port is too small. The 50 cal is cool, but make sure you can use it.
Also, the bipod and scope are both too high up for their mountings, and the green block he's put into the gap in the VSS stock would make it impossible to operate the bolt. I can't really see how you'd get more than maybe two fingers around that rear grip, either.
Also, that thing that's being used as the magazine isn't a magazine at all, it's actually an adaptor for using STANAG magazines in an Airsoft P90 [http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/GMCMA/Other%20stuff/PICT0384.jpg].
desternu said:
a small project i started.. please tell me what i should improve..
WW2 rifle thingy.. {NOTE: its not BASED on anything, but i have taken my inspiration from the Mosin Nagant)
For a WW2 rifle, it seems awfully short-barreled (unless it's the carbine version of that rifle, I guess), and I can't say I'm liking the two rectangles in front of the front sight, they look horribly out of place. Also, you should probably use a shorter front sight with that AK tangent sight, the current one looks way too high. The bolt also seems a little high up on the frame.
a small project i started.. please tell me what i should improve..
WW2 rifle thingy.. {NOTE: its not BASED on anything, but i have taken my inspiration from the Mosin Nagant)
a small project i started.. please tell me what i should improve..
WW2 rifle thingy.. {NOTE: its not BASED on anything, but i have taken my inspiration from the Mosin Nagant)
Looks great. I love the use of stripper clips, but you've got the clip too far forward - it's meant to clamp onto the ends of the rounds. Apart from that, no technical criticisms.
Evil Tim said:
Also, if we're allowed drawings, hey:
Both drawn in biro without the aid of a ruler, but hey.
I like it a lot. You've really thought about what would be changed for a modernized lever-action. Would it be okay if I used the picture for a tabletop RPG?
I like it a lot. You've really thought about what would be changed for a modernized lever-action. Would it be okay if I used the picture for a tabletop RPG?
Semi inspired by Desternu's Mosin-Nagant inspired rifle, another post apocalyptic gun. If you're wondering what's up with the scope, it's meant to be copper.
Semi inspired by Desternu's Mosin-Nagant inspired rifle, another post apocalyptic gun. If you're wondering what's up with the scope, it's meant to be copper.
Looks good other than the pistol grip, which I can't see the function of; you could only really get one finger on it below the trigger, and it'd stop you gripping the rifle by the stock. Also wants an ejection port in there somewhere.
Pistol I made last night but couldn't be arsed to post.
I rather like it when there's a trend; it means I can nick shittake inspiration from everyone and create stuff that I otherwise wouldn't have thought of.
Alright so the G36 magwell is getting some love I dig
I'm split between calling thing a machine pistol and an SMG, but I have decided that it is cool. W&T effects are up to code and I like the pistol grip there.
For a drawing, that is pretty amazing. I can't draw worth shit so I can't offer comment on the artwork, but I would like to point out that your rear sight is kinda weird and that your curvy hammer is slightly bizarre. I do look forward to the next sketches, though.
Props for using the 50 cal, but there are two problems with using a piece that your gun isn't meant for; the magazine is a wonky shape and your ejection port is too small. The 50 cal is cool, but make sure you can use it.
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