Labyrinth said:
Archemetis said:
I think your humour style needs work. Apparently random events are amusing once every.. oh, shall we say 30 comics? More than that and it's just off-putting. Monty Python might be able to pull it off but you've not quite got their style I'm afraid.
Other than that, the art style is stellar as ever.
I'm gonna agree with the fact that I don't have the style of Monty Python, which is mostly why I'm glad I'm not trying to be like them.
I should probably have explained, the over the top "Whacky" happenings in the first pages is actually all just character introduction and such.
Also, the only reason I'm trying to work in a joke every page is because it's not meant as a book, it's a web-comic at it's core, and most web-comics consist of a page ending on the majority with a punchline, so it's almost entirely out of my hands how... Constant the humour seems.
Don't get me wrong, I value your opinion, but it just seems like you were looking at it from the perspective that it's an ongoing story, once the introduction of the characters is over with, the story will take a back seat and the comics will be more a collection of random occurances (Some like you've seen in the current pages, some more toned down)
With the occasional story-arch thrown in for good measure.
Seems to be a winning formula for web-comics.
Like I said, though thanks for your opinion and I will be toning it down in time, making the humour slightly more subtle.
