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Name: Vfraar
Race: Talonisk
Age: 151
Gender: Male
Appearance: Eight foot, two inches, dark reddish-brown scales. Eye's usually some shade of green. Thick, muscly body covered in scars from previous battles. Both legs are biotic below the knees. A long, rippling scar runs down the side of his tail, which ends several inches shorter than it should in a titanium serrated cap. He stands with an air of cool contemplation and governing calm, which demands respect from those around him.
Role: Combat Commander
Armor: Vfraar's armor is an advanced model of the T5 Commander armor system. It contains systems for tracking and locating troops and enemies, mapping out environments, listing statistics and storing previous tactics and logistics for future use. The chest and torso pieces are made of high-impact heavy sralium, which offers resistence against high-velocity projectiles, high-pressure explosions, and heavy plasma absorbtion. The arms and legs are made of lighter, less durable material, to provide greater movement and flexibility.
The helmet itself has two modes; overseer and comabt. In overseer mode, the helmet appears to simply be a large, metallic headset that fits around his neck, with an earpiece and built-in mic. In this mode, Nazar's newly developed "Air HUD" system sends combat information and images into the invisible sensory feild in front of his face, so that he can view the battle without needing a screen or visor. In combat mode, protective plates slide up out of the neckpiece and around his head, complete with a visor which replaces the Air Hud system.
Cybernetics/Biotics: Along with standard reflex and agility enhancing cybernetics, Vfraar's body contains a special cybernetic that regulates his heart rate, blood pressure, and respitory systems. This sysetm keeps him calm and in control at all times, as it was found long ago that he had heart and respiritory issues(He almost died during a battle once, at the young age of 54, because of a heart attack, and it was because of this that he was moved from basic infantry to begin training for leadership positions). There are also several neural triggers attached to his brain, wich will be explained below.
Due to a failed transmission and a well-aimed Sarason Grenade, both his legs are biotic below the knee. They're modeled to look like Talonisk feet, with claws that can be elongated at will(see neural triggers).
Weaponry/Equipment: Vfraar's primary ranged weapon is the MN7-Reverb, a mid-weight automatic plasma weapon about the size of a human assault rifle(scaled up for Talonisk, of course). It's shots are designed to inflict maximum surface damage, instead of maximum penetration, so when they hit unarmored or lightly armored targets, they'll cause much more widespread damage to tissue and musclues, instead of simply passing through. Against armor, it's not quite as effective, unless the armor is high-velocity mold armor, in which case the Reverb shots will cause more damage to the armor itself then a penetrating shot would.
His main melee weapon, the SenStick, is a flexible titanium sash, that drapes over one shoulder or around the neck. Upon being triggered by one of his neural receptors, it hardens into a long, oblong oar type shape that can be used either as a bludgeoning weapon or a sheild. He also carries a titanium knife and a plasma pistol.
Personality: Vfraar is a Talonisk soldier through and through. He is brave, cunning, and able-bodied, with a feirce sense of pride and honor. The many troops he had commanded over the years have always respected him, not only because of his in-grained sense of leadership and duty, but because he has earned their respected through his attitude and actions. He treats them as they ought to be treated, respects them like a brother when they should be respected and beats them into the ground with an iron fist when they need to be beaten. His tactical mind and experienced foresight have saved the lives of thousands of soldeirs.
In domestic interaction, his demeanor is cool and calm. He rarely gets angry, instead preffering to quietly put the opposition in their place through intimidation and an icy tongue. Vfraar enjoys talking, which is unexpected from a Talonisk. He respects Nazar for their intelect and savy, Grel for their rock-hard resolve and strength, and humans for their... nevermind. He doesn't really respect humans that much. They have better senses of humor than the other races, but not much else going for them. If anything, he respects their determination to continue on in a world where everyone else is better than them.
Bio: Born on the Talonisk colony world of Beroral, Vfraar lived a simple lifestyle working at a deepwater cren fishery on a lake near the outer settlement. Ships would stop by once in a while to bring the colony supplies, but mostly they were isolated from the rest of the Fedaration. That was, until a sabotaged cruiser containing several high-up government officials was forced to crash-land on the planet. Pirates pursued them, and since the planet was so far from any high-population worlds, a very long and bloody chase ensued across the major continent. Eventually the oficials made it to the settlement, with the help of the locals, and a battle took place. The pirates were eventually beaten off, long before official reinforcements could arrive, and the planet suddenly became a galactic tourist attraction. Vfraar had the opportunity to see the galazxy now, without having to stow way on a barge freighter.
The galaxy proved to be very unforgiving, and through a series of unfortnuate events, Vfraar ended up enrolling in the military. He took part in many glorious battles as a small time grunt, until his superiors noticed his skills and began pushing him up the ranks. But it wasn't until he almost died from a heart attack during a particulary close battle that they decided to put him in a real leadership role. He excelled at it. Battles and wars were won under his call, and soon he was given prime commands over vast battalions of soldiers. Many a glorious victory was tucked away beneath his belt. So, at the ripe age of 151, when he was asked (not assigned, mind you) to take a combat commanding position in the crew of the Sentinal's new flagship, the Great White, he accepted.
I'm assuming the Great White is the spaceship we'll be on?
*Ahem*
Yes, we will be on Great White. Very nice job by the way.
There's one more, I'm giving the lad till tomorrow but if it's not submitted by the time I get back from school I'm starting the selection without him.iceland said:Omg.. I actually read that all
Are there more reserves or was he the last one?
*Crosses fingers*
GrEAT!
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Yes well, I don't have school tomorrow, but, if you should feel like it, by all means finish it RIGHT before you go to bed or something, or like, get up early, since I joined the site again, for, you? Yes well, if you could wrap it up before tomorrow, atleast give us a little tell-tell of who's game and who's out, that would be great!
Cheerio
*Ahem*
Yes well, I don't have school tomorrow, but, if you should feel like it, by all means finish it RIGHT before you go to bed or something, or like, get up early, since I joined the site again, for, you? Yes well, if you could wrap it up before tomorrow, atleast give us a little tell-tell of who's game and who's out, that would be great
! Cheerio
Okay, I'll change it to a Stealth Hit and Runner. I'm in my holidays so I should be able to update it daily
Stealth Hit and Run
Weaponry/Equipment: Dual wielding Laser Firing SMG
Name: LSRG2
I pimped it but I don't know how to post it. When I do I will
It releases blue laser that will cut through most alloy but penetrates only some types of shields but when up close, it is quite powerful. It will go through any human alloy and some alien ones. It also has a energy bayonet that he uses up close and it is powerful too. A stronger version of his dagger
He has an energy dagger that has mini-blades that cut through weak surfaces but not medium or heavy armor.
Finally, he has timer-explosives that stick. Good for his usual hit and run attacks.
I'll change some of the bio too.
Bio: Nouw grew up in New Korea, Seoul. Both of his parents were Bankers that even though worked a Night-Shift, manged to spend time with Nouw. He is gifted with intelligence and quick-thinking. He spent most of his time at school, studying and reading. On his 11th birthday; while coming back from work; A suicide bomber destroyed the Vehicle his parents were in. A report was made into this and their bodies were never found. From then, he moved into America to start working as a Student Teacher and was a success. He turned into a lecturer for English Literature but was forced into the army. He found a talent in Stealth Hit and Run when he was guarding a camp when someone threw a timed bomb. He quickly defused it and changed it, applied sticky liquids onto it and accurately stuck it onto an enemy patrol speeder while not being seen. He slowly gained rank and this is how he became a Sentinel:
On a Campaign called: Anti-Terrorism Green 2 he only had a few time-bombs and camo-clothes when he encountered an enemy force, slowly moving to the nearest outpost. He applied the bombs in the places that will damage the enemy the most without being seen and took the whole force down. He was untouched and in excellent condition when they found him up in a tree. Now he awaits his opportunities at the ...
I hope I get in. Its the only worth-doing RP that hasn't started yet so...
Stealth Hit and Run
Weaponry/Equipment: Dual wielding Laser Firing SMG
Name: LSRG2
I pimped it but I don't know how to post it. When I do I will
It releases blue laser that will cut through most alloy but penetrates only some types of shields but when up close, it is quite powerful. It will go through any human alloy and some alien ones. It also has a energy bayonet that he uses up close and it is powerful too. A stronger version of his dagger
He has an energy dagger that has mini-blades that cut through weak surfaces but not medium or heavy armor.
Finally, he has timer-explosives that stick. Good for his usual hit and run attacks.
I'll change some of the bio too.
Bio: Nouw grew up in New Korea, Seoul. Both of his parents were Bankers that even though worked a Night-Shift, manged to spend time with Nouw. He is gifted with intelligence and quick-thinking. He spent most of his time at school, studying and reading. On his 11th birthday; while coming back from work; A suicide bomber destroyed the Vehicle his parents were in. A report was made into this and their bodies were never found. From then, he moved into America to start working as a Student Teacher and was a success. He turned into a lecturer for English Literature but was forced into the army. He found a talent in Stealth Hit and Run when he was guarding a camp when someone threw a timed bomb. He quickly defused it and changed it, applied sticky liquids onto it and accurately stuck it onto an enemy patrol speeder while not being seen. He slowly gained rank and this is how he became a Sentinel:
On a Campaign called: Anti-Terrorism Green 2 he only had a few time-bombs and camo-clothes when he encountered an enemy force, slowly moving to the nearest outpost. He applied the bombs in the places that will damage the enemy the most without being seen and took the whole force down. He was untouched and in excellent condition when they found him up in a tree. Now he awaits his opportunities at the ...
I hope I get in. Its the only worth-doing RP that hasn't started yet so...
Name: Nouw Corien
Race: Human , Half-European and Half-New Zealand
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Only his hair and face looks like that. He is fit and stands out in the crowd for he is 2 metres tall. He usually never shows his face and when he does, it is emotionless. He always wears his armour
Role: Stealth Hit & Run
Armor:A custom made suit of titanium and adamantium ( couldn't resist sorry )It is a light suit that offers stealth, speed and agility. The chest-plates are adamantium and the rest is titanium. But only a thin-layer. Over the adaman. and titan. are invisibility fibers that change to the environment he or she is in. The suit is hydrothermally charged and has enough power to run it for 24 hours including reserve power. Without the stealth, the armor is red on the chest-plates, red lines on the legs and arms and the rest is grey. The custom-made helmet is like the one from Starship Troopers except that it has alien material covering over his face. It also can change color. The HUD shows ammo, power remaining, his/her surroundings ( m2 100) temperature, brain-waves and emotions.
Cybernetics/Biotics: Nouw has a rather basic biotic. When he was on his way to a mission, a window shattered from a asteroid and he half flew out. The Automatic Door shut and ripped his upper-half of his body. He had special surgery to reduce?extract?destroy? his waste. Every 5 hours, a tank on his back 1/4 fills. He can simply pull it out and pour it onto the ground. It mixes with special chemicals in his body that evaporates quickly. 1 litre in 1 minute. The smell is a minty one. During the surgery, they helped his asthma and digestion problems. Even though the asthma still stands, he can temporarily destroy it. 3 days and then he'll have to puff the gas again. He has enhanced sight and speed.
Weaponry/Equipment: Weaponry/Equipment: Dual wielding Laser Firing SMG
Name: LSRG2
It releases blue laser that will cut through most alloy but penetrates only some types of shields but when up close, it is quite powerful. It will go through any human alloy and some alien ones. It also has a energy bayonet that he uses up close and it is powerful too. A stronger version of his dagger
He has an energy dagger that has mini-blades that cut through weak surfaces but not medium or heavy armor.
Finally, he has timer-explosives that stick. Good for his usual hit and run attacks
Personality: He is a quiet man that dislikes talk. He usually never talks unless he must. Even though he never talks he knows what to do and does it well. He isn't aggressive and can control his anger quite easily. When in fights he ends it quickly, trying not to make a scene. Ignoring this he is very nice and polite. But he in the field he's never nice. Quite harsh actually.
Bio: Nouw grew up in New Korea, Seoul. Both of his parents were Bankers that even though worked a Night-Shift, manged to spend time with Nouw. He is gifted with intelligence and quick-thinking. He spent most of his time at school, studying and reading. On his 11th birthday; while coming back from work; A suicide bomber destroyed the Vehicle his parents were in. A report was made into this and their bodies were never found. From then, he moved into America to start working as a Student Teacher and was a success. He turned into a lecturer for English Literature but was forced into the army. He found a talent in Stealth Hit and Run when he was guarding a camp when someone threw a timed bomb. He quickly defused it and changed it, applied sticky liquids onto it and accurately stuck it onto an enemy patrol speeder while not being seen. He slowly gained rank and this is how he became a Sentinel:
On a Campaign called: Anti-Terrorism Green 2 he only had a few time-bombs and camo-clothes when he encountered an enemy force, slowly moving to the nearest outpost. He applied the bombs in the places that will damage the enemy the most without being seen and took the whole force down. He was untouched and in excellent condition when they found him up in a tree. Now he awaits his opportunities at the
Notes: Suffers from mild asthma but it is under control ( read bio ). He loves spicy food for it "ups his game" but no one see's him eat.
Race: Human , Half-European and Half-New Zealand
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Only his hair and face looks like that. He is fit and stands out in the crowd for he is 2 metres tall. He usually never shows his face and when he does, it is emotionless. He always wears his armour
Role: Stealth Hit & Run
Armor:A custom made suit of titanium and adamantium ( couldn't resist sorry )It is a light suit that offers stealth, speed and agility. The chest-plates are adamantium and the rest is titanium. But only a thin-layer. Over the adaman. and titan. are invisibility fibers that change to the environment he or she is in. The suit is hydrothermally charged and has enough power to run it for 24 hours including reserve power. Without the stealth, the armor is red on the chest-plates, red lines on the legs and arms and the rest is grey. The custom-made helmet is like the one from Starship Troopers except that it has alien material covering over his face. It also can change color. The HUD shows ammo, power remaining, his/her surroundings ( m2 100) temperature, brain-waves and emotions.
Cybernetics/Biotics: Nouw has a rather basic biotic. When he was on his way to a mission, a window shattered from a asteroid and he half flew out. The Automatic Door shut and ripped his upper-half of his body. He had special surgery to reduce?extract?destroy? his waste. Every 5 hours, a tank on his back 1/4 fills. He can simply pull it out and pour it onto the ground. It mixes with special chemicals in his body that evaporates quickly. 1 litre in 1 minute. The smell is a minty one. During the surgery, they helped his asthma and digestion problems. Even though the asthma still stands, he can temporarily destroy it. 3 days and then he'll have to puff the gas again. He has enhanced sight and speed.
Weaponry/Equipment: Weaponry/Equipment: Dual wielding Laser Firing SMG
Name: LSRG2
It releases blue laser that will cut through most alloy but penetrates only some types of shields but when up close, it is quite powerful. It will go through any human alloy and some alien ones. It also has a energy bayonet that he uses up close and it is powerful too. A stronger version of his dagger
He has an energy dagger that has mini-blades that cut through weak surfaces but not medium or heavy armor.
Finally, he has timer-explosives that stick. Good for his usual hit and run attacks
Personality: He is a quiet man that dislikes talk. He usually never talks unless he must. Even though he never talks he knows what to do and does it well. He isn't aggressive and can control his anger quite easily. When in fights he ends it quickly, trying not to make a scene. Ignoring this he is very nice and polite. But he in the field he's never nice. Quite harsh actually.
Bio: Nouw grew up in New Korea, Seoul. Both of his parents were Bankers that even though worked a Night-Shift, manged to spend time with Nouw. He is gifted with intelligence and quick-thinking. He spent most of his time at school, studying and reading. On his 11th birthday; while coming back from work; A suicide bomber destroyed the Vehicle his parents were in. A report was made into this and their bodies were never found. From then, he moved into America to start working as a Student Teacher and was a success. He turned into a lecturer for English Literature but was forced into the army. He found a talent in Stealth Hit and Run when he was guarding a camp when someone threw a timed bomb. He quickly defused it and changed it, applied sticky liquids onto it and accurately stuck it onto an enemy patrol speeder while not being seen. He slowly gained rank and this is how he became a Sentinel:
On a Campaign called: Anti-Terrorism Green 2 he only had a few time-bombs and camo-clothes when he encountered an enemy force, slowly moving to the nearest outpost. He applied the bombs in the places that will damage the enemy the most without being seen and took the whole force down. He was untouched and in excellent condition when they found him up in a tree. Now he awaits his opportunities at the
Notes: Suffers from mild asthma but it is under control ( read bio ). He loves spicy food for it "ups his game" but no one see's him eat.
Once I get back from school tomorrow most likely. I'm just waiting for one person to get their submission in, another to do an edit, and discussing details with one over PM. That and I still have to choose my Co-GM, at the moment I'm torn between Yorg, 3W or iceland, seeing as they are all pros in my book.Sci-Fi luver437 said:
I have a list comprised of those sheets I think are going to make the cut.
-Iceland
-Quad08
-SomeBritishdude
-3W
-Myself (Duh...)
-Sci-Fi luver437
-Yorg
-TheGreatCoolEnergy
-lalala567 (Sent the sheet over PM but still needs the edits)
Subject to change and debate at this moment and of course once I choose a Co-GM.
Woot! Can't wait to start. Also, I noticed that my name was on the list of possible Co-GM's, and I'd just like to point out that I've never GM'ed before. I'll have to start somewhere, of course, but you may not want my first GMing job to be your Master RP. Just sayin'.Exictednuke said:
True....I still need to think out timezones and whatnot. Because I would like for the Co-GM to be European just to keep this thing moving as smoothly as possible even when I'm not here.Yorgmiester said:
But if you don't think you are up to it then it's fine with me.
Well, first of all I'm not European, in case you thought I was. I live in NC.Exictednuke said:
My schedule is pretty free most of the time though. I'm up till around midnight usually and can post in the mornings. The only problem I foresee is that due to my job, my weekends are super busy. So during forum rush hour, when everyone is going mental and destroying the storyline(i kid, i kid), I might not be around.
It's up to you, really. I'll do it if you you really want me to.
It's hot, muggy and boring, actually. The mountains are bland, the beaches are blander, and nobody knows how to operate electronics. All the people are rednecks and all the tv channels are either football or nascar. The only good thing about it is sweet tea.Exictednuke said:
*ahem*
But moving on, yea 3W is always a good idea.
