Shivari post=18.68064.621650 said:
Alright, I'm ready to critique, and since you asked for it, I'll start with Shivari's plan.
Okay I'm to format my critiquing like this:
Weapons:
Location:
Food Supply:
Water Supply:
Raw material Supply:
Other:
Okay here's the actual review:
Weapons: blunt objects: Those would work for getting through zombies to get to a close destination, though it is very hard to kill a zombie and you can get tired easily.
Location: Wal-Mart/Target: That's pretty smart considering thats the best place to get food and resources, and also because there are few entrances.
Food Supply: Roof farming: Brilliant!
Water Supply: Rain: So what happens when It doesn't rain for a week?
Raw Material Supply: Home Depot: Thats good.
Other: How would you find twenty people in a zombopocalypse? And even then they wouldn't be very trusting, and just to make things harder at least one would probably be infected and pretending not to be up until they turn. What if the bridge collapsed while supplies were being moved?
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